As I felt the knife painfully enter my chest I stared at him helplessly, like a sheep to the slaughter.
Author notes
This is an adapted excerpt from my story The Promise. I hope you enjoy it.
A contest entry
- A challenge! Submit your shortest short-story! by I am..
120 points, ended July 24, 25 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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Oh wow! That was brilliant! Amazing job! That was the hreatest shortest short story ever!
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Ohh.. also check the full version of this story...Thanks for reading!
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Hm, you know this is very interesting. It's like every other story, but the last sentence makes it interesting. Explains the emotion, how she's feeling etc. And very creepy feeling from it but great work!!!
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Chilling. Love the last part 'like a sheep to the slaughter' - this is excellent work Crys!
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Wow, so scary!!! But it is quite the shortest short story!!! I say this is brilliant!! Good job!
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Its very intresting and smart.Ill read the whole thing in the near future.
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It's a very good excerpt. I read the story and liked it so much. Good luck with the contest!
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