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I don't really like this, probably since I whipped it up in about two seconds because I got bored.
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FAVE MOVIE: twilight
FAVE SONG: daggers speak louder than works
FAVE BOOK: twilight

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  • imhurting
    October 4
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    i love this! i can feel her falling deeper in her thoughts. great. xx

  • This was very well written, in my opinion. :]
    Your descriptions were very vivid. My personal favorite part was the part where the character slid into the bathtub of water and let his/her blood dye the water.

    Well written, and thank you for entering my contest! Good luck!


  • SceneTeen
    July 28
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    really good!


  • Doll Faise
    July 27
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    So macabre. But DEFINETELY descriptive. I felt it. Really good. (:

  • Adinatak
    July 20
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    It's a really good description. Can really see the girl doing it to herself; very vivid. Thanks for entering into my contest.


  • PurpleScene.
    July 20

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    Its bizare and so true, I can definetly relate to it, and I'm sure this is what it's like for almost every girl.

  • i love it

    thats what i want to do so bad

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