Mnemonic- Prologue

The voices....... So..... Alien.1

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Head ache....... Getting..... Worse.3

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'An explosion engulfed him, burned him from head to toe.'5

Flashes of...... Flame..... Blinded.6

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'He was kicking, flailing to keep above.'8

Taste...... Salt water.9

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'Strong hands lifted him out.'11

His arm........ Burned.12

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'A women’s scream threatened to shatter his ear drums.'14

Flame...... Explosion..... Water...... Scream...... Mellissa!15

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He awoke on a metal table, flinching when he tried to get up. The man looked in his late twenties, with his tall build, firm jaw, and jet black hair.17

'Where am I', he thought to himself as he observed his surroundings. He was in some sort of laboratory that looked as if it had been abandoned. There was shattered glass everywhere and cobwebs that threatened to overrun the entire room.18

So many questions were swarming through the man’s mind; 'where am I, why am I here, who am I?'19

He tried to get up, but his head started to throb violently. His mind was swarming with thoughts and... Pictures.20

'A woman in her teen years hurried down the busy side walk. She had a short build and had long, golden hair that seemed to reflect the morning sun. Two men were following close behind.'21

He tried to snap out of the trance, but then another image filled his thoughts.22

'A man was sitting on a park bench, reading a newspaper, his face hidden. Another man was sitting next to him, a gun hidden in his pocket.'23

He snapped out of it and walked outside.

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