Depression

Laying on the bed, she cries. Happiness has failed her, leaving a shell who has given up on life. She cries and cries, her emotions leaving her through tears of loss, and tears of lost hope.1

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wrote this at a summer program...not real sure i like it, but decided to post it anyway.

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  • musicaddict
    November 10, 2005
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    thanks...i guess kinda


  • Wicked Child
    November 7, 2005
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    Im not sure i like it that much, no offense, but idk, i dont really like the subject, but it is well written.
    _Nick_

  • mindgames101
    September 4, 2005
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    its a good write nads, short but good and true i believe many have felt this before and many wiil yet.


  • Blue-Eyed-Brunette
    August 31, 2005
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    Short, sweet, cut clean to the point. By George, I think you just might have something here. I think we all feel this way at some point in time in our lives. Something we can all have an easy time relating to...all too well I'm afraid actually. Anyways, good write, keep it up.
    With Love,
    Nikki


  • Ghost of a Siren
    August 31, 2005
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    I feel like this right now. good write.

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