Bust-Up A Rhyme

She was bored!1

The relationship was too predictable, she needed a little exitment in her life. She felt like they had been pushed together, that it had been expected. He was one of the lads, a friend of her brothers, they had grown up together, followed each other around, stuck up for each other, and did all the things brothers and sisters should.2

So why was she going out with him?3

She didn't have a clue, she knew now was the time to end it, but she didnt know how, if she sat and told him face to face, she was scared he'd be upset and cling to her. She decided it had to be unique, it had to be different and she had to have her brothers there to support her in this.4

She knew the place.5

They all went to the club together, they played a game called Bust-A-Rhyme, where they made up songs on the spur of the moment. This was her only chance.6

She was up against her brother first time round, but knocked him off the top slot easily, Now it was his turn, he always took this seriously. Despite thier relationship, she knew he would sing to his hearts content.7

and he did. The battle had begun...8


"Babe, you know you rock my world, you'll always be my girl, and I could never think of life without you here."9


"How do I know you love me, I'm starting to doubt you ever did, You sacrifice a night with me, for a lads night out on the beer"10


"You my love come first, You I'd never hurt, why didn't you ever say you didn't want me to go?"11


"A true love would expect, to be shown that respect, and dont you think that thats something you should know?"12


"I'm sorry babe, I'll change, Life wont be the same, I'll treat you like the queen you really are."13


"Yeah until you'r with the lads, and then it'll be just as bad, as it always was, thats just the way you are"14


"But darling you make my flesh tingle, I couldn't imagine life being single, You will always we the love of my life."15


"Yeah but honey, sleeping with you, is like sleeping with my bro, and I dont want to become my brothers wife.16


"What you trying to say, I thought you liked it that way, so we could always turn to each other in times of need."17


"Sharing things is one thing, But I need something more intersting, and you are not the future that I see." 18


"But babe i love you more, than you will ever know, please dont cast me aside like a peice of trash."19


"Sorry babe its finished, our relationship as diminished, why dont you go out and drown your sorrows with the lads?"20


At that, he drops the Mic, falls to his knees and begs her one last time, but she had made it clear it was over, the crowd was cheering, she had won the battle, He got up and walked off stage, To the jeering crowd.p>

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  • yin20yang
    July 21

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    Sad Sad. Hilarious!! Wow, I would hate this.... but it is very original!!! Good job, the story was smoothly written.

  • Wow! That was a unique idea, breaking up through song!AWESOME STORY!!! Thanx for taking the time to enter, good luck