The sand glittered in the sun, maybe that's why I went there, who knows? I just want to get one thing straight. My name is Aerideth. That's right, Aerideth. Kind of weird, right? Whatever. There's a dog here. She's completely white and her eyes are brown. Her name is Klara. She belongs to me, yes, me. We live in a small cabin, near the beach, but not to close.1
"Klara! Come on! It's time for dinner!" I yell opening the front door. In moments, she's at my feet, wagging her long tail. I smile at her and set down the food bowl. She sits and starts to eat, laying down, weirdo. 2
"Aerideth!" Kiesuke yells. Oh, yeah. I forgot about Kiesuke. He's got brown hair and blue eyes. He's sort of a brat and talks back sometimes, but he is my little brother. Yes, that's what I said. My little brother. After our parents disapeared, I was left with him, so we moved out here.
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Very descriptive and short... Only 142 words. D:
I wish you would make it longer so we could see what your true intensions for this are. -
It's small as yet, but definitely worth working on! If you flesh it out and make it more engrossing, it'll be perfect! great work on what you have here! It's very interesting!
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