Jimmy's Turtle- Part 1

"Jimmy!!" Bob exclaimed. Bob was Jimmys' best friend. "You wanna come over to my house after school??" Bob asked. Jimmy didn't answer. He knew he had to stay after school today, because he was caught passing a note yesterday. Jimmy wanted to grow up faster. But whenever he tried to do something a big kid would do, he always did something wrong!! 1

"That was a question you know," Bob said interrupting Jimmys' thoughts. 2

"Yeah. I know. I can't." Jimmy answered reluctantly. Bob walked into the building. The turned around. "Fred is comin'" Bob said persuasively. Then he turned back again and walked into the classroom.3

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Jimmy wants to grow up faster, but whenever he does something a big kid would do, he messes up, or gets caught!!

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  • blablablooey12
    August 31, 2005
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    hey!!umm...he comes in later...haha its not done yet...
    emily m


  • Humma Shiemo
    August 30, 2005
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    What does this have to do with a turtle?