Joann Parker

There once was a beautiful girl. Her hair was as blond as the sun, and as soft and silky as a silk worm's silk. She had brown eyes that charged to Hazel when ever she saw something she wanted. She was about 17 years old. Every other girl adored her, and every boy wanted to date her. Her life seemed prefect, beaut, friends, boys falling to the ground at her presents. Nothing seemed wrong, and no one thought for one minute that she was unhappy. But she was. For you see, no one ever once thought that she would become the nation's biggest threat!1

Her name was Joann Parker. Her mother's name was Beth. Her farther's name was Jerry, and she had a younger bother named Ben. Just like you would think, her family was rich, she was a cheerleader. She went to Lenmark High School, and she was in the 11th grade when it happened.2

She was starting her collage credits as a English Major. Everyone said that the teacher for that class was a total hottie, and they were right about that. He had dirty blond hair, blue-green eyes, and a very bad boy look to him, but he was all good. every single girl had a huge crush on him. When Joann took the first look at him she to had a huge crush on him, but when Joann wants something she goes for. Her target this time was Mr. John Locket. John was about 24 years old, and single. So to Joann he was far game.  3

Every day would go the same, Joann would go to his class and look as though she was paying attention, but instead she as looking at him. (And watching his butt when ever he turned around, or bent over.) But one day he said to Joann, "Joann, I've noticed that your grades have been slipping, and thought that you might need some tutoring."4

"That depends, who would be the teacher?"5

"I would, why do you ask?"6

"oh, no reason. It;'s just that my mom, and dad want the best for, and they wouldn't be able to sleep if it were anyone but you!"7

"Oh, well in that case I'd be flattered to help. I would have given you extra help, even if they said no to the tutoring. How is tonight?"8

"Great!" And so it started. A soon to be relationship that would bring the whole nation down.9

I well add more on to my story if you like it, and but i first need some comments on it!10