Tessa ran downstairs to get a soda. Her mom stopped her, "Tessa clean up the dog shit." Tessa rolled her eyes and picked it up. She got her soda and went back upstairs to her parents room. She was watching her show and as soon as it was over she fell asleep(she had stayed up all night.) 1
She awoke to someone trying to pull her pants down, she knew who it was,her perverted stepdad,he also did other stuff....much worse stuff. She moved over and just layed there. He stopped fearing she would realize what he was doing to her. He acted like he was asleep. Tessa waited about 10mins and got up, it was 2 A.m. She texted her boyfriend and told him the story. He called her.2
"Oh my gosh babe im so sorry."3
"Its ok, its not your falt."4
"I know, but I still am."5
"Don't be."6
"Babe?"7
..............8
She fell asleep and had nightmares, they were all about what he has done to her. The worst one was about when she woke up with his finger inside her.9
...............10
She awoke crying. She checked her phone, 7 texts.11
Hello?12
Babe?13
Im really worried14
What happend?15
Please text me16
I love you17
Text me in the morning.18
She called him instead19
Hello?20
Hey21
Are you ok?22
umm Yeah23
I love you 24
I love you too25
What happend? 26
Nothing27
Its something28
I just had nightmares29
Oh, Im sorry30
Dont be31
What were they about?32
I don't want to talk about it33
ok34
I have to go 35
Ok36
I love you37
I love you too38
She hungup and went downstairs. She started on her chores, her brother came down and offered to do them (ok whatever gets me out of doing them she thought.) 39
She trotted off upstairs to take a shower, and anytime she takes a shower she cuts herself.40
When she gets out of the shower and gets dressed, she goes into her room where her stepdad is waiting
Idc about the grammer I wrote this at 3:30 in the morning during a storm, I just want to know how the story is
Comments
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awww, that's so sad, it needs more detail about the shower, you need to be descriptive but other than that i think its a really good story,
claire
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keep going!
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it is a awesomest story, but yea grammar lackss...
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its good

carry on please




