the invisible superman

Always in demand 1

here i am the invisible super man 2

the man with the plan 3

always willing to lend a hand  4

always ready to take the blame 5

sometimes i get tired of this game 6

every day is the same 7

behind the scenes where i abide 8

i seem to hide 9

some times 10

i try and i try 11

but no one sees me 12

sometimes 13

no one even believes me 14

if anyone needs me 15

to cry on a friendly shoulder 16

they look to me to be there problem holder 17

but what happens when I'm in need 18

why must i let my open wounds bleed 19

no one wants to be 20

the friendly shoulder problem holder 21

for the someone slightly bolder 22

is it just me or is it getting colder 23

ha the golden rule 24

to everyone I'm just a tool 25

well guess what 26

even super man has his27

late day light 28

and his dark no moon night 29

i call it my krypto nite 30

its a tough fact but even with all my might 31

some times even i get too weak to fight 32

i know all this chatter really doesn't matter 33

my complaining is in vein 34

because my life and strength i must keep maintaining35

i just wanted someone to know what it was like firsthand 36

what is was like 37

to be the invisible super man 38

the one no one can see just apart of history39

Author notes

This is how i feel sometimes im not bragging trying to say im superman or anything but sometimes i feel no one sees when i do something right!!

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  • laciegirl-11
    November 3, 2005
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    And again yay!! i like this one too!! keep it rockin... and get more!! lol

  • sexkitty69
    August 30, 2005
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    hey i love your story o love super man i watch him all the time you got my attentoin your not invisible if you think people donj't see you then they won't notice you well love the story keep up the awsome work i love it alot
    ~*nnoi*~


  • Haunted Elegance
    August 29, 2005
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    SHWEETNESS!

    SHWEET!! That was totally freakin awesome. I "felt" it. Anyways(and, no, I DON"T mean anymoose, lol) You write some pretty cool stuff, guess you got it from me. Well, i'm gonna read your last one now so yea. coolness

  • SoCiAlLy--ExCePtEd
    August 29, 2005
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    dang

    wow, that was thooperly written, you should make it into a rap song, that would be awesome....just remember i am always here for you, but obviously i mean nothing to you, so i obviously know all too well how you feel...i go through the exact same thing every day at school...wow, you just like walked up to me and we chatted but now i am leaving...

  • Munda
    August 29, 2005
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    This sure is a depressive write. I know how that feels... always "available" for others, but when you need them, they all seem too busy somehow. I hope you got some relief venting this. Btw, it would help if you use some punctuation. It's kind of hard to read without any.

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