Silence chapter1 part 6

What the F*ck? Why is There some random vampire dude making out with a chick? And why did they look so familiar? I looked walked closer, And my eyes widened in shock, The two vampire looking creatures, Looked up at me, with their Blood red eyes. My eyes widened in shock. The girl...She looked. She looked so familiar. Almost like my mother? Just in a teenage vampire form. 1

“ MOM LOOK AND COME IN MY ROO-“ 2

The vampires disappeared. Seconds after they left, My mom, Alex, and Kyle came barging in my room, and I stood there looking like a F-ing idiot. 3

“ hello? What the H*ll is going on? Why are you standing there?” 4

My mom came over to me and shook me. I couldnt move, no matter how hard I tried, I couldn’t. It was as if I was in a coma, but I could see. My mom gave up, Kyle looked at me weird, and walked over to me, followed my a pissed off Alex.“Here, let me do something to the B!tch .” Alex, came over to me, and Smacked me in the back of the head. I suddenly broke out of my “coma” 5

“..the..F*CK ALEX! IM GOING TO FRICKEN MURDER YOU” I ran over to him, and he ran down the stairs shrieking like a girl. I stopped at the top of the stairs... Is this boy gay?6

“ ARE YOU GAY?” 7

I yelled in curiosity, Alex glared at me and stuck up his finger. I screamed, and ran down the stairs. U jumped on him, and slapped in the face. Yea it was an awkward position because I was sitting on him..0_o.8

“ Next time you do that, You wont be living to see the next day” I growled. 9

“okay, Nikki, I may not be your step brother..YET, but, you sound sexy when you growl. “ He grinned at me, and I looked at him like he was a mad man. And surprisingly, so did Alex, But I swear I could feel his eyes burning into me. 10

“ um..b!tch, get off me” I took my advantage, and Kneed him in the groin. He moaned in pain, which I thought was sexy11

Whoa! Nikki, you cant think that, thats VERY wrong to think!... I got off him, and walked over to kyle, and growled at him, just to see his reaction. His face was priceless. Ha. 12

“ by the way , Where is my new..STEP dad?” I asked him. Kyle told me that he was in the office. My house was BIG, so we had an office.13

“ mkay then, have fun with the devil” I referred to Alex, who was still in pain.14

I laughed and walked away to the office, I saw my “step dad” and walked into the room.15

“..um... Im sorry for what happened this morning, I was kind of....Shocked really” I felt bad for what I said to him this morning. He looked up at me, 16

“ its okay. I understand, Nikki. I just hope you are ready to accept me as a father. I don’t want to rush anything, or make you feel uncomfortable. “ 17

I smiled at my..dad.18

“ its okay....dad.- I saw a big smile grow on his face-, I think I can really try my best. Maybe we can have a lot of fun, along the way” 19

I smiled at my dad. He told me to sit, and he leaned forward, making me do the same.20

“ so, Nikki... I see you have met Alex? Huhh?” 21

I looked at him, and laughed.22

“ That DEVIL! I hate him so much!” 23

I chuckled, and so did he.24

“ you know, him and Kyle have been friends since they where born. You should get a chance to know him. He really isn't a bad kid, Nikki.“ 25

I smiled at my dad and got up from the chair, about to leave.26

“ will do daddy, will do” 27

I walked away, and into the living room, to see the two boys playing halo3. I smiled, they had No idea I was there..hm...I could have some fun....

Author notes

what do u think?

Im too lazy top put pics. lol I WISH I COULD WRITE MORE BUT I HAVE TO LEAVE< GOING ON VACATION! DOnt worry, Ill write hwile im with my neice..=D

hah bet you diidnt ee the vampires coming. TELL ME WHAT YOU GUYS THOUGHT SHE WAS GOING TO SEE!

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  • This was really good i liked it!!!! mind you i like all your chapters so far lol

  • the vamps were not expected.
    really good though.

  • sorry, forgot the claps.

  • I went through and read them all again. All though the vampire bit kind of confused me, I like it. Are you ever going to post a link to what Alex or Nikki look like? Because I would be very intrested in seeing how you invisoned them. I like the whole Alex and Kyle being best friends. I think it would be extremely cute is the three of them became bestfriends but that's just me.

    I hope the father doesn't turn out to be an abusive ass just because I don't want this story to be like a lot of the others. I like how it's different from all the other stories.

    I hope you continue with this story vampires or not.

  • keep writing! I love it!


  • havatica
    July 16
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    Grr!!! I wanna know what happens. I think that the whole you're sexy when you growl was hilarious. lolz I think she should end up with Kyle even though he's going to be the step-brother :} Oh yea. I agree the vamppires are un-important considering the drama! lolz Post more soon!!!!!

  • This is amazing You have to write more please!!!
    I definately didn't see the vampire thing coming lol I thought she was going to see Alex in her room. Her and Alex are really cute together even if they hate the living hell out of eachother. You have to write more ASAP

    • haha, I was thinking that she should see alex making out with someone in her room, but that would be weird, and hard. lol You will be very very surprised! with what happens.....mwahahahah

  • u hv to write more asap its amazing x


  • PurpleScene.
    July 16

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    Ah I dont care about the vampires! Write like 4 more chapters! lol her and Alex are sooooo cute together lmao though they hate eachother.

    • lol....you will be SO suprised what happens. NOBODY is going to see it coming- twords the end though...mwahahaha-

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