He told her he was fifteen,1
she believed him, she was so keen.2
They talked, chatted for awhile,3
their conversations were anything but juvenile.4
AIM, waiting for him to sign on,5
staying up and talking until dawn.6
He told her the right words she wanted to hear,7
thinking he was only 15 she had nothing to fear.8
She would tell no one, not a single peep,9
it was her little secret to keep.10
He told her he wanted to meet her and that he had a plan,11
oh she was so excited to meet her mysterious man.12
A motel down on 5th street,13
is where they had planned to meet.14
She picked out a cute little dress,15
and fixed her hair so it wouldn't be a mess.16
She told her mom she would be at the mall,17
if she needed anything, just to call.18
To the motel she took the subway,19
in her head thinking what in the world should she say?20
She went to the motel and knocked on the door, excited as can be,21
a voice said "come in, you surprised me."22
There were so many commotions astir,23
and everything else was a blur.24
She woke up in a hospital bed,25
she felt a warm blood behind her head.26
Her mom was weeping in a seat,27
at the bottom of the bed by her feet.28
"What happened, why am I here?"29
"Oh honey, I love you dear."30
"Mom tell me what is going on!"31
"By the time the motel attendant came in, that bastard was gone."32
Tears, tears, and more tears came from her mom,33
she couldn't stay calm.34
The doctor came in to the mother to talk,35
he noticed she was awake so instead they went on a walk.36
He returned and began to talk "We gave you some pills...."37
with that she got a severe case of the chills.38
"...You should be ok now, you should be fine,"39
Her mother couldn't take it anymore, "Shut up! You act as if things will be normal and divine!"40
The doctor simply said I'm sorry and left the room,41
and the girl awaited her doom.42
Her mother just cried for some time after,43
thinking of how it used to be laughter.44
She wasn't quite sure what she was going to become of this,45
all she could do was give her daughter a goodnight kiss....46
Author notes
This is a story about a girl who met a guy online and the guy wasn't really who he said he was, and he raped her. All I have to say to everyone out there, be careful what you do on the internet. People may not be who they think you are. ♥
A contest entry
- Love and Promises by Eddie.
600 points, ended August 8, 55 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
1 - 12 of 12
-
You always hear these stories on the internet, it pisses me off to see people taking advantage of young kids...Its horrid!! People like THAT should be shot...
-
Very well written, and a message that needs to get out there. This is quite prevalent I think! You did a wonderful job!
-
This is so creepy and it should hold as a lesson for naive little girls and boys alike that the internet isn't just some playground. It's full of creeps and freaks who are very good at seduction. Well written! I love the flow and the feel is very well constructed as well. Good job!
-
its really sad, but still very so beautiful, i loved it, and thank you for sharing it with us.
-
this is awsome. i wrote a poem like this...if only i could find it........plz keep writing
-
This poem really gets to the point. Not that I've ever gone that far, but I guess all of us here know exactly what you mean. Nicely done.
~X -
not all cases end up badly. I am just saying sometimes, a lot of the times things turn out not so well. But I am glad you met someone you love. Like I said, not all cases turn out badly.
-
I happened to meet someone I love online.
-
Nicely done
Wow this poem it wonderful. it says so much about todays issues. really good. -
this is really good,yeah it does happen just about everyday and some people are gulliable to believe that,but even ppl that arent sometimes get wraped up in that.anyway great write,this was well written and well expressed,great write ~Laura
-
that was a very powerful poem.
great way to raise the issues.
<3 -
aww that sux. thats so sad bc it happens like every day. its really well written, good job! keep it up!
Adding your comment:
1 - 12 of 12
