In My Heart

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I look up at the sky,2

Knowing you're there somewhere,3

wondering why4

you had to go so soon.5

And there is a piece of you in my heart6

so i just want to say7

we never actually broke apart.8

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  • Lies4Truth
    July 22
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    Its short but sweet i like how it flows great job and good luck in my contest


  • andhearts. ox
    July 18
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    Short but good.


  • Le Masquerade silver member
    July 15

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    Very good job! Short but full of meaning. I liked it a lot. Thanx for entering my contest Good luck!

  • Lies4Truth
    July 15

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    Very short but very good, Even though it is such a short poem you can really understand its meaning Great job and good luck in my contest