A siren's beckoning

The sun had  just set, but there was still a golden glow in the horizon. A girl could be seen walking along the beach. Others had walked the beach before her and many would still be walking even after she was gone. The difference was that she was walking in the after hours. People went into their homes after the sun had set . It was the time for different people to be about; people mortals had no business mingling with. Hind seemed to defy such superstititions. She relished the privacy she had here. The beach was her sanctuary. 1

  She would sit for hours in the warm sand watching the waves hypnotized. Sometimes she sang haunting melodies that ended with her laying her head on her arms as she surrendered to the sobs that racked her slender body. Unknown to her, creatures in the water watched her with curious eyes. They argued and debated about her. She had caught their interest. They had gazed into her eyes and saw something they wanted. A story worth telling, but when this story should be told. That is what they debated so furiously about.2

  Hind would walk there everyday and everyday the eyes would watch her anxious for the day when she would belong to them. They were waiting for the right time. They didn’t have to wait long…3

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      The sea raged and roared like a caged lion. Its waves pounded violently against the shore, almost swallowing it up in its wrath. The night was inky black and neither stars nor moon could be seen. It seemed like even they hid in fear dreading what was to come. The night itself was alive with unholy beings plotting for mischief. Beings like the Sirens, fey creatures with features of both woman and fish. 6

   On Stormy nights like this they would sing luring many a fisherman into a watery grave, but tonight was different. The menacing mermaids sang into the darkness lending their voices to the howling of the wind. It was the girl with half a heart they meant to lure. 7

  Hind was asleep in her bed, tossing, turning and thrashing in her sleep. The nights were rare in which she found rest. Her nights were a torment of nightmares and dreams of long ago. In this dream, she saw herself chasing after that lover of long ago begging for a fleeting word or a look. God! What she would do for just one look!8

 In reality, she was walking towards the beach answering the call of the menacing mermaids. They ruthlessly invaded her dreams rummaging through her memories and recollections bringing them to the surface with aching clarity.  She swayed as she walked. Her nightgown billowed in the wind baring her white legs to its cold fingers. She shivered as the fingers tangled and twisted her hair. Her eyes were open, yet her gaze was unseeing. She was spellbound. Thunder rumbled as she walked on the cold sand. She walked slowly, one step then another until foamy waves swept under her feet. She stopped then, uncertain whether she should continue.9

 The Sirens were unfazed. They wove their enchantments swiftly. The pain the girl had kept at bay for so long was unleashed. They said time heals all wounds, but this girl’s wounds have never healed. The pain was still as fresh as it was years ago when Hind and her lover parted ways. They had no choice. 10

 The waves grew higher and higher beating at her bare legs and soaking her nightgown. She wept, her tears mingling with the salty spray of the sea and the rain that was starting to fall. She sobbed in helpless grief and gasped a name over and over like a charm. 11

 She saw herself years ago when her parents refused her lovers suit. She had locked herself in her room for days weeping and chanting that same name over and over. Her parents didn’t relent, not even when she swore she would have no man but him. She had many suitors, all of whom she refused. They may have been up to her parents standards, but Hind’s standards were entirely different. A heart who has loved once can never love again. 12

The Siren’s were well into the game. The night’s mischief had them in high spirits. When the girl was within their reach, they grabbed her pulling her down to the sea’s murky depth. Another force intervened and the girl came into her senses. Instinct took over. The instinct to survive and she swam to the surface. She fought with the waves that seemed to want her dead. She struggled helplessly to stay afloat as the waves battered her tired body. 13

Hours passed and still no sign of rescue. Hind was tired. She could no longer keep her eyes open. She meant to rest them for only a minute and then everything went black… 14

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   Hind woke up to the sunlight streaming on her face. She rubbed her weary eyes in amazement. She was back in her room! Had it all been just a dream? She wet her lips as she gazed around the room in amazement. She licked her lips again. They were salty like after she had been swimming in the sea. Could it be? 17

  The dream had been so vivid. She could still feel the Siren’s claws pushing her down between the rampant waves. Most of all she remembered her frantic will to live, and the way she fought the waves to stay alive. 18

 “Live” someone had whispered “Your life is just beginning”19

  She could still hear the whisper echoing in her ears, and the slap of the waves as they beat down at her, almost crushing her. She felt the pain all over her body. God! It can’t have been real, or could it?20

 Hind was confused. She got dressed still pondering this question. 21

“ Hind” her mother called “There’s a suitor here”22

“oh mother I told you no more” started Hind but stopped in mid-sentence when she saw the suitor. She stood rooted to the spot gazing at him in wonder... Their eyes met and spoke again for the first time in years. 23

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Years later, Hind and her husband have grown up and were blessed with many children. Hind still doesn’t know what happened that fateful night, but she thanks Allah for her many blessings. 25

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  • horus8
    December 21, 2003
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    I was trying to think of some stories outside of Greek myths involving sirens, and I'd be damned if I had a hard time? Weird. I think I remember a druid/gaelic one, but that was it.

  • Shahoodeh
    December 6, 2003
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    Thank you! Thank you!!!!! I edited it..thanks for the comment...I'll fix the sentences later..
    I'm glad u like it!!! *beams happily*


  • Barbara Moderators member
    December 5, 2003
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    Whoa! EXCELLENT! This is well told. I didn't even look to see how long it was, I just read . The description is powerful, and the images vivid.

    (Fifth paragraph, first sentence "On Stormy nights like this they would sing luring many a fisherman into a watery grave, but tonight different" ...is the word 'was' missing?) Other than that, I think a few sentences could benefit from being combined to keep a description flowing (curse my English teacher for putting that idea in my mind forever ) But this is an excellently told tale, and I like it a lot!!!

  • arden
    December 1, 2003
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    och, heed well the call of the sirens... michtief is affot. honestly, i was so vara into this that i was sad to see it end. i read that last word and found myself thinking... 'tis done??? i wanted more. who can guess as to what makes one desperate to clingto life in thoes trying moments. i saw in this the possibility of unferlying truths. thoes waves that come down crashing... are no just water waves but the tides of our life, and in the wors storm our waves over take us sometimes and threaten to drown. the luring voices of the sirens just voice of our own concience, able to dig and pluck from the ary depths of our sould. the struggle in ourselves to find balance and peace. thankfully, in our darkest moments, there is always another voice to intervien.

    arden


  • November 30, 2003
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    I enjoyed this story immednsely - beautiful description and perfectly simple. Wonderful.

  • trumpetfalcon
    November 29, 2003
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    Great read! I have to admit that I clicked this on accident, but I'm awfully glad I did! What a wonderful story! Keep it up!


  • Piscean soul
    November 29, 2003
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    i'll promote u!

    oh my dear Shahoodeh..that's just great. I don't care but I'm putting it in the featured box! (Featured Box lace where you use a number of points to promote but issue is, it doesn't remain for long up there).

  • rgrpaperboy
    November 28, 2003
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    What I read is a story well done. A touch of sadness but strong look to the future. The past trying to stay but the future wins. A dream of conflicting worlds within the emotions of a young girl wanting to be loved but loves her privacy as well. Much more in the story and hopefully the readers see it all. Excellent job and thank you for your comments on The Warmth of His Arms. Take care Rick

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