Vampire Seduction

Within the deep dark oceans of his heart1

he caught a glimpse of women that caught his eye2

her essence he could almost taste3

he yearned for her, to be his embrace4

her eyes melted his undead soul5

her body covered up with lace6

as she danced, his eyes began to change7

he wanted to feed upon her, alone8

As she exposes her milk white neck9

his lust arouses her as she dances back10

his cold hands touch her warm breasts as he licks his wicked lips, his poison blood boils up as he makes his move, spinning her round and round, she feels so high as he kisses and caresses her to the sky.11

He takes her into the night, into the forest, out of sight12

there is nothing she can do, he has got her under his spell.13

now forever on this night, they'll dance together in this eternal delight.14

He lays her under a full moon, candles flickering in the wind15

He bites her neck as his sharp nails rip though her clothers16

she opens her legs, the wetness of her womanhood invites him in17

he thrusts, her pleasure of her moans makes him feel alive18

her blood so warm, it satisfies his soul.19

His fangs dig deeper into her, sucking every last drop from her throat 20

as she clutches his back.21

His desires are coming clear, he bites his wrist, he holds it over her mouth so every drop drips onto her lips, she slowly gets up to drink her masters blood.22

he asks her "Do you want to lie with me in eternal darkness?" she nods as she feeds on his precious dead blood.23

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  • Ryan79
    February 16
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    Wow! Dark, dirty, and beautifully well written. A really great story. I imagined it all as it happened. What a great peice.

  • hyper thing
    January 22
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    a Nice write


  • lies-n-pain
    August 27, 2005
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    wow very deep poem! i enjoyed reading it. i had to read it a few times to get everything that you were saying and meaning, but very nice write!