this place sucks

what strange weird world is this1

i wondered on a stop through the abyss2

all this color but nothing green 3

what place is this what does this mean4

balloons on legs inhaling little clouds of smaller balloons5

alot like the stories you hear from the loons6

what madness i thought as balloons ran past7

all this way i came, and i came really fast8

i just thought I'd stop for a smoke 9

"smoke what", i thought this place is a joke10

wait till they hear about this stupid dumb place11

they probably won't believe me and take my licence to space12

he's crazy they'll say he's not to be trusted13

but they knew that already cause my spaceship was busted14

they knew what i came for and now had an excuse 15

to stop me from spaceway smoking abuse16

thats how they caught me in this place without plants17

nothing heres green and they knew in advance18

this affects business and now here they come19

to ask me some questions do they think I'm that dumb20

i was just leaving i shouted and ran21

off to my spaceship to abandon this plan22

if those guys need smoke they'll just have to wait23

cause i dropped all my seeds here isn't that great24

I'll be back when theres something to smoke25

cause i like to deal it to the regular folk.26

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my topic was a world without plants

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  • Sjr
    September 5, 2005
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    damn this world would suck fuckin ass without weed!!!!! great poem or story or whatever the hell u call it nowadays. muahahahaha


  • rindomai
    August 27, 2005
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    heh a world without pot, eh? nice. seems a littel more like a poem than a story but it can stay. good luck