Pain of a broken heart

Every day, my heart was broken,
A little bit at a time
The pain didn’t get easier over time
My heart didn’t become hardened.1

Every time my heart was broken,
I picked myself up off the floor
I brushed myself off as best as I could
And buried the pain deep inside2

I didn’t let anyone see the pain
I don’t want them to know
I don’t want them to change what they say
I just want someone to care3

Care enough to see past the lies
Someone for me to trust
But I’m losing touch with reality
Who is there for me?4

No-one is there to help me past the pain
No-one will pick me up off the floor,
No-one will help me mend my heart
Would I let them, anyway?5

Do I trust anyone enough to see my flaws?
Do I trust them not to turn?
Do I trust them not to laugh and point?
Do I trust them not to stare?6

So every day I stay away,
From anyone who could help
My heart has been broken too many times
And one more will tip me over the edge

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  • Caradoc
    July 18

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    I think a lot of people can relate to this poem very easily. You wrote this beautifully and I can't see why anyone would attack this poem. Well...then again...jealous people do all sorts of insane things.


  • Lies4Truth
    July 14

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    Very beautiful It is something that i feel very farmiliar with. And i love how you were able to relate such feelings into words an amazing poem thank you and good luck in my contest

  • Aww- I love it. I can so relate to this.
    Beautiful job, hun. 5/5 for everything, I say. >_o

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.