My Chelsea

:::::::She looked up at the purple like sky, and wondered what was missing.::::::::1

Chelsea Spinelle never thought her life was totally complete. 2

(Its like, have you ever had that feeling when you forgot something very important? And it bothers you, and nags at your brain because you forgot it… well she has that feeling.)3

But she has the perfect life. She s a straight A student at West Roxbury High School. She has a dependable boyfriend who is taking her to the winter formal in January. She is the youngest of 3 children, and has both a mother and father who love each other. She has the almost perfect life. 4

She had flashes though, flashes of people she didn’t know looking down at her as if she was lying down. She had flashes of a family she didn‘t know. She had flashes of being raped…. She had flashes of things she would never do, and of things that have not happened.5

There was one flash that appealed to her. It was of her and a boy. She had never seen his face, but knew that he loved her. Those were the flashed that she liked the most, the ones in which she was with him. He would hold her hand when they were younger, and tell her that he loved her, and she would try to reply but her voice was never heard. She saw flashes of then dancing, laughing, and going to the beach together.6

A new boy came into school a week before winter formal, he seemed so familiar, but she had never met him before.7

(Have you ever met some one that you could have sworn that you had met them before? But it was different for Chelsea had seen him in a flash, he had been looking over her, he had been there at dinner, he had been every where. But she had never met him, but she already felt like she knew him.)8

The new kid, Dustin, couldn’t take his eyes off her. She was here, he had finally found her. 9

Ever since Dustin came to town Chelsea was having more and more frequent flashes, longer ones. But these ones happened at the worst times. They would happen during class, while crossing the road. Or when she was near Dustin. It was like something was telling her to go to him, like he was the missing piece of her world. 10

She looked up at the purple like sky, and wondered what was missing. She didn’t know. She had the perfect life! She had a loving boyfriend. Great friends and family. She had everything. 11

After a month of the flashes becoming more and more frequent, Chelsea finally approached Dustin. 12

“What is wrong with me?” Chelsea asked after pulling Dustin into an empty classroom.13

“You don’t belong here, this isn’t your world.” Dustin said with extreme calm. 14

“What do you mean? I have parents, brothers, sisters. A boyfriend who loves me. What do you mean that I don’t belong here?” She asked starting to freak out 15

(Wouldn’t you freak out too if some kid that you met probably once told you that you didn’t belong here and that this wasn’t your world?)16

“Its all to perfect, don’t you see?”17

“What do you mean?” She said skeptically. 18

Dustin held out his hand and replied “Let me show you.”19

Chelsea slowly walked towards his out stretched hand, and placed her hand with in his. And with out a word, she was suddenly in a hospital room, looking down at a girl lying down in the bed. Chelsea almost fainted. That girl, aside from her hair which was a died black while Chelsea’s was a natural blonde, was her. 20

She tried to run away but Dustin held on tightly. She turned towards him and saw the tears in his eye, and she to started to cry. It all fit. All of the flashes she had, who Dustin was. It all made sense to her now. 21

No words were spoken as Chelsea let go of Dustin’s hand and slowly walked towards the bed. She had to have stood there for around five minutes, until her final decision was made. Chelsea sat down on the bed next to the girl and it was like the girl became transparent, as Chelsea laid down inside of her. 22

Dustin still in the same spot, ran over to the bed waiting to see if it worked, waiting to see if his sister was back.23

After a few moments nothing happened. Seeing his loss, Dustin kneeled down beside the bed and held on to her hand and cried. His only chance at getting his sister back was gone. 24

But as if sensing his tears, the girl began to move, and she placed her hand on his head and he looked up and saw her smiling face. 25

“Cat.” Dustin whispered. “Cat… I love you…” And with tears streaming down his face he kissed her cheek. 26

“Your such a cry baby, little boy.” Cat whispered in return. 27

“No I’m not, you just don’t cry enough big sis.” Dustin said, causing her to laugh. 28

Cat's face became serious and she asked “What happened?”29

Dustin’s head shot up and said “You don’t remember?” Cat just shook her head confused. Dustin just thought of Chelsea and said, “An angel saved you.”30

Author notes

yeah.. there are probably mistakes.. so just tell me and i will fix them

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  • August 29, 2005
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    IWASN'T DONE agh.
    stupid computer.
    There's this kid that lives down the street from me who's name is Dustin you should meet him cause this might be one of those weird psychic things that happens between my mom, sister, and I all the time. Not usually all three. Just combinations. Yeah.
    BUT
    I might just have to draw a less than mediocre picture to go with this far better than mediocre AWESOMELYGREAT even story.
    ah I love you.
    -le jenny


  • August 29, 2005
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    ohmygosh
    LOVELOVELOVE
    have I mentioned to you how much I love the concept of guardian angels and such? OR... just angels in general?
    Cause I do.
    And this is incredibly awesome.
    There were a few typos that I don't remember too well and I'll probably end up telling you about later, but this was nearly perfectly executed and an awesome idea and everything.
    If I had said that out loud there wouldn't have been any commas.
    Lovely lovely story, dear.


  • Blue-Eyed-Brunette
    August 29, 2005
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    excellent

    Omg this is so cute...I absolutely love this...where did you ever come up with the idea for it? I got tears in my eyes while I was reading it. I love the ending and every other single thing about it. Keep up the great work!