just a piece from my new werewolf story!

When lunch came the next day, I hesitantly sat at the empty table. Alot of my friends kept glancing. But today I couldn't sit with Hannah, Peter, Polly, or Trenton. I had to talk to Kane. I sat at the empty lunch table, not even touching my food. Eventually, Kane slowly sat next to me. "Hey, what are you here for?" Kane asked as he sat down. I bit my lip, holding back my tears. "I'm sorry about yesterday, I didn't mean it." Kane stared at me a long moment, and I was almost sweating from the nerve. "Yeah, that's okay." We both knew what we saw, and that was what made this so incredibly awekward. After a long silence, I broke out. "How Kane? How did you vanish like that?" I saw in Kane's eyes that he had a secret. "How?" Kane rolled his eyes as if he were annoyed with me. It was annoying me as well. "Do you think maybe we should stop talking?" Kane proposed. My heart almost shattered, and I was considering the fact that I loved him. "What... w-w- what you... you- no!" I demanded. "No, we are good friends!" Kane glared at me. "Could you be any louder?" He asked. My eyes widened in annoyance. "What is with the sudden attitude?" "Now your acting like my mother." He groaned. "Well I'm sorry I just want an answer." I explained to him. Kane stared at me now, and it was becoming quite uncomforatable. "How did you vanish in the blink of an eye?" I asked just one more time. Kane wouldn't rest his eyes from mine. "Can you come to my house tonight? I can explain but not here... not now." I stared at him a long moment, trying to decide. "Yeah... yeah okay." I agreed. I was nervous to though. It was hard to sneak out of my house. Not because it was difficult, because my dad was such a light sleeper, and so was Timmy. School went by way too fast after lunch. When I got in my little black car to drive home, I sat inside a few minutes, thinking about Kane... excited for his explanation. Went I got home, I saw my dad cooking something on the stove. He never cooked. "Dad, what are you making?" I almost laughed at the fact I said that because I never thought I would. "Oh, just this uh, hamburgur stuff..." He said with a small voice. I slipped off my converse's and walked into the kitchen, glancing at the stovetop. "It's hamburgur helper Dad." I said. "Oh, yeah that stuff." He replied. I sat at the table where Timmy kept licking his lips. "I hurt my little tow today, I got boo boo." He said with a frown. "Awh." I replied. I wasn't too focused on Timmy though. I was thinking and thinking about Kane. I was excited to see him tonight. He said to leave at eleven and it was only seven p.m. Four hours. I groaned thinking I had to wait so long. My dad glared at me. "I'm trying to cook ok, it'll be done soon!" He laughed. "No not you Dad." I assured him. Timmy licked his lips again. "MMM I'm hungwy!" He shouted. Soon enough my dad served the chunky dinner, which Timmy enjoyed quite fairly. Eleven came soon, and my dad had gone to bed with Timmy. I turned down the volume on the TV and tiptoed out the front door. I closed my eyes and shut the door as softly as my hands could. I stared at my car, but decided that would make to much noise. I walked around the house and into the dark backyard. I stared at the dirt path that lead into the black woods. I was afraid terribly, but I wanted to see Kane, I needed to know. I reluctantly walked into the path, surrounded by thick dark forests. I crossed my arms and shivered as I walked deeper into the woods. I kept staring all around, and decided to run. The running caused me to feel like I was being chased, so I kept running. I saw the old abandoned dog house, so I felt a tiny bit relived as to I was halfway there. But that ounce of relief vanished when I heard running behind me. It was much faster though, in fact, I didn't even really make out the sound before I was grabbed by a pale man. I yelped for help, but he put his icy cold hand over my lips. "Shut up bitch." He said into my ear. My eyes widened as my heart pumped a thick fear. I threw a fit with my legs but the man's arms began to crush my ribs. I felt his lips press lightly onto my neck. He realeased his hand from my lips, and held me tight. "Please, let me go I won't tell anyone!" I pleaded. I knew he wouldn't. "I just want your blood, so shut up you dirty skank." Now the night air had a terrible chill. I felt abnormally large canines just barley touch my neck. It almost seemed as if he thirsted for me. He was moaning for me like I was some delicious cake. A tear dripped from my eye. My whole body shook. I didn't want to die yet, I wanted to see eighteen, I wanted to see twenty one... I wasn't ready to die. "I want your blood, I'm thirsty for it." Came his cold voice. "HELP!" I screamed. He used all his stength and threw me into the dirt path. I felt a terrible bone-crushing pane paralyze my body for half a second. "OWWWWW!" I screamed in pain. Now the moonlight gave me a glimpse of his face as he snarled at me. He was pale and had long red hair and red eyes. He slapped me and I could automatically feel a throbbing pain in my slightly thin cheek. "HELP!" I screamed. I cried and curled up like a helpless animal. This man was a bastard, and I knew he was going to kill me. I cried like I did when I was four. "DADDY!" I screamed. I had never said that word for years, not childish like that. I knew I was too far for him to hear me. "DADDY!" I yelped as the man kicked me in my stomach. I felt nautious, my stomach cramped terrible. Suddenly the man jumped high into the air, ready to crush me, but as he came down I saw a figure jump into him. They both fell into the leaves. I stood up trembling. It was frightening. I saw the figure stand up, the man ready to bite him... it was Kane. Suddenly Kane just expanded and his shirt ripped off. Right before my eyes he turned into a gigantic, medium long furred, pure black, lime green eyed werewolf. He was up to my cheast as far as I could tell. I saw him bark at the man and the man vanished into the woods. I stared with my jaw dropped as Kane changed back into a muscular seventeen year old guy. I didn't notice the fact that he was nearly naked with nothing but his now ripped up jeans on, but his eyes went from lime to the almost black they always were. I swallowed the bitter taste of fear in my mouth as Kane walked over to me. I gasped as he came very close, staring at me. "You ready for me to explain?" He asked. I couldn't really speak. "Um... uhhh yeah?" I said hesitantly. Kane took me to his backyard where we sat on his back porch with the light dimly on. "I'm a werewolf." Kane said. I blinked a couple times, and then sighed. "Well I think I figured that out." Kane grinned. "Well did you know even though I still have a heartbeat I will always and forever be seventeen." I stared at him for a long while. "Wow... um... congradulations." I said. "Well, maybe... but that means I'm not really alive. My heart just still pumps. And of course I breathe." I shook my head. I had to be dreaming, but I COULDN'T be dreaming. "This is so crazy." I said. Kane traced my cheek with his finger. "You can't talk to me anymore Molly." He said. "No." I said. I stood up. "I love you Kane." Kane stood up and held me by the hand. "It's too dangerous." He said to me. I widened my eyes. "I don't care." I whispered. I kissed Kane. I hoped he would kiss me back and he did. He wrapped his arms around my waist too. "This won't work." He said, pulling away. "I need you Kane." Kane laughed in disbeleif, looking away. "Kane, don't you love me?" I asked him, my voice shaky in tears. Kane looked at me and ran right up to me. "You don't know how much I love you Molly." Kane said. I smiled, still crying some. "Then kiss me." I saw Kane move slowly toward my lips, and I closed my eyes tightly. I felt his lips just lightly touch mine, and he pulled back. "I will do whatever it takes to keep you safe." I smiled, my stomach felt funny and I couldn't breathe. Kane grabbed my hand. "Hold on to me." He said. I jumped onto Kane's back. He jumped through the trees. I gasped. That went by in a second. Then he jumped again. My stomach dropped as we went up, and then turned as we came down. With one last stomach turning jump we were at my house. I walked inside, and Kane didn't leave until I was safe in bed. He turned to leave. "Stay until I fall asleep." I begged. I knew if my dad woke up Kane could just vanish. Kane smiled. "I will." He said, sitting in the chair by my bed. All of the thoughts ran throug my head. Kane would always be seventeen? But he has a heartbeat? Is that his weakpoint... his heart? I kept asking myself until I drifted off into a deep sleep. The next morning I awoke to a little Timmy jumping on my bed. "WAKE UP IT'S SATURDAY!" Timmy yelped. I glanced at the chair, no Kane. I rubbed my eyes and tried to convince myself that last night was all a dream. After Timmy stopped, I threw on a tight T-Shirt, a brown jacket, and some jeans and jumped in my car. My dad was in the garage. "I'm going to Kane's!" I shouted out of my window as I started the car. He nodded. I pulled out, and speeded down the road. I slammed on the brakes and pulled into Kane's driveway. I jumped out of my car and ran anxiously up to the front door. I clutched my fist and made my way to knock but Kane opened the door immediately. My eyes narrowed at him. "Come in..." He said. I glanced inside from behind Kane. "What is inside your house?" I asked with a gulp. Kane grinned at me. "I guess you don't want to come in, I have some explaining to do, huh?" I nodded in total agreement. Kane shut the door behind him and we walked onto his back porch, but now it was a casual cloudy day, unlike the night before. "Yeah, I'm a werewolf." Kane assured me one more time. I sat down on a big soft white chair, he sat on the wood once next to me. "So, you like live forever?" I asked. "Not exactly." Kane sighed. "I still have a heartbeat, so, I could die of being stabbed in the heart... or lungs, or back... just like you. But I am immune to all diseases... I never get sick EVER." "So you probably will die, of like being robbed or something?" I asked. "No, probably not." "Why?" "I have amazing senses and reflexes..." I sighed. "This is crazy." I reminded him. "So, can you change anytime you want?" Kane nodded. "Yeah. And we don't change under a full moon, that's all myth... the moon has no control on us... we just decide to become wolves on full moon... it's kind of like a holiday for us, but we don't always." I sighed and then looked and stared at Kane. "Is this going to work...us?" I asked. Kane stared deep into my eyes. "Yes, it will." He said softly

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