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truth: I have always wanted to go into a computer world. 23
Imagination: "Hello!" I yelled at Erin, "I know you have a big computer but usually big things die quickly."45
Erin blinked quickly then smacked me in the face making a bright red mark where her hand hit. "You know I love you baby. I know you love me..." she folded her arms and gave a deep breath. "Can you please show me a little support from time to time?"67
"Stop it!" every time she would give the puppy eyes I had to listen. "This computer might have been a waste of $500!" I did love her very much. Ever since the first day of tenth grade. She gave me the pouty face and shrugged her shoulders. "It looks cool?" I pretended.89
"Thank you s--"1011
"Ssss." I backed up to look at her. She was frozen. Not in ice but in time. Her hair was still and her lips were still saying so. "Erin!" I called thinking she was playing a prank on me.1213
The giant (ugly) computer started glowing and making a strange noise. "Honey?" I shouted. A swirling funnel of electric blue light came from the computer and surrounded me.1415
I couldn't move, I couldn't breath, it was like I was in a coma. It was the most terrifying moment in my life.1617
Everything went dark for a moment. When the light came back I saw tall buildings covered in ram and motherboards. "Hello?" I yelled hoping there would be people there to help. I was right.1819
"Goodmorning sir, this is a world unfirmilliar to your kind." a man walked up to me, "This world is for ASDCCX2345 or User #65, name: Erin. She has recently created this world. Are you Erin?"2021
I tried to hold in the laugh, "You called me sir and asked if I'm a guy... aren't you sup[posed to be a computer?" the sensation that I belonged strated to settle in.2223
"I am sorry. I have made an error." the man gave me a disk and pointed me in the direction of a tiny building. That is now where I reside as I write this tale. I need you to know Erin. I love you.2425
Please Erin... or anyone who reads this you must trust me when I say... this is my home.2627
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A contest entry
- Imagination Station by Sammiannnz.
350 points, ended July 20, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Does it end in the wrong place?
Comments
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Interesting story. One spelling mistake near the end; there is an ] in the middle of supposed. Well done and good luck for the contest.
Sammi
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beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.

