The night was soft and full of wonder,1
The light were turned down low, to our favorite romantic songs2
And we were cuddled up tightly together beneath natures romantic moon.3
Every vein in our sweating bodies were bulging with exstacy4
Every touch explicit with nervousness,5
And as we moved together beneath the sheets.6
My longing to please you strengthened your sighs7
My fingers were becoming a fine tuned instrument of energy.8
To your angelic purity, your muscles in your mound were tight 9
Til I slid my hardened cock inside of you,10
Pushing gently you cried out please god don't stop11
I need you and I want you to fill my warm wet pussy with cum.12
Fuck me baby fuck me and make me scream.13
You were biting me and leaving marks all over me14
Raking your fingers across my back, Leaving wounds of pleasure upon me.15
I was in heaven and your moans told me you were on the Verge of the16
Best orgasm that you ever had, every smack on your ass.17
Drove you deeper into the bond of our heated passion,18
And I was going wild as a came up inside of you..19
Now together we laid as one..And I couldn't wait to make love with you20
Again, Anywhere at Anytime...21
Author notes
Midnight erotica a story of steamy passion
I like it sexy..
What did you think? Please comment!
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ok mmmmmmm this was descriptive but i am left to my imagination on the emotional side. Mechanical in what was happening but passionate perhaps not as much .... erotica is not easy to write well good erotica am i feeling wet or wanting to be the woman in this story ....sorry not tonight am thinking of a how to manual. There are some good lines in here .
Every vein in our sweating bodies were bulging with exstacy4
Every touch explicit with nervousness,..
i would have liked to see more foreplay yep i wanna feel your fucking me is the best way to put it. tease tease and more tease...I see more passion and love in your darker writes. So I know you can do it. ok had my bitch so can take it on the chin too.....oh am leaving that alone right now.
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So, I had to come back and read it again. So, sue me!
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That was very vivid and very detailed, if a bit short. YOu did a good job. It definately catches your attention and keeps it. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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DAMN! Need a cold shower now,if I can stand on these trembling legs. I like this side of you,then again,haven't found a side I don't like.
Well Done!!!
Deena
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Whooooooa,, is it hot in here, or just me. Daaamn! Umm, yeah, well done.
Hugs, Lady Raven
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