just another happy ending

every day i turn another page1

Its like my life is a story i cant stop reading2

with every page my mind takes another beating 3

I cant escape I'm stuck in this cage4

I'm trapped in this prison called life5

i must suffer for now i haven't earned the knife6

they scream turn back head away from the light7

why wont they let me go cant they see my future dark as night8

they don't under stand I've lost my will I'm no longer bold9

can they not see these barbed wire chains that i hold10

i cant give up the voices told me so11

it doesn't matter now death is no longer my foe12

i desire its peaceful and eternal embrace 13

now i meet my creator face to face14

i pause and wait as i pray for a second embrace15

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hey i think this one is pretty neato!!!

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  • laciegirl-11
    November 3, 2005
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    Hi!! its me again... i like this one too!! ok i like all ur stuff and i will complain until i get more!! lol...u kno u still love me...lol! I think your poems are awsome tho and i cant say that enough!

  • bloodless
    September 1, 2005
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    ...........who might you be..!!???


  • August 26, 2005
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    tis good

    cool poem... haha i know you.. (you told me check your stuff out..so blah.. here i be.. o.O )

  • cayleyxox
    August 25, 2005
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    this is neato! you have lots of talent. this is a great write keep it up