enough is enough

do you hear my pain1

or could my screams of agony be in vein 2

I try to walk the walk do what I'm told stand her go there 3

the same story over and over again, its startin to get old4

but lately I've been feeling a little more bold 5

stop i cant take it 6

Ill listen to you no more 7

stop i cant take it I'm clawing at the floor 8

get out of my head outa my mind 9

get out right now or your about to find what one who once was nice has now considered your actions twice10

no i cant take it no more 11

my back doesn't have room for another knife 12

I'm sorry but i cant handle another cut 13

enough is enough you sit back and shut up up 14

i will not do as I'm told i start my own rules now 15

so oops wait a minute its your turn to be put on hold 16

yes that's right its me  fighting back 17

who knew i had a spine in my back 18

I'm about to start swinging like I'm on crack 19

so get out of the way or ya gonna get burned20

yes that's right its about time the tides have turned21

I'm tired of flowin to motion of the stupid ocean22

tell Buddha to shove it23

its time now I'm gonna risen above it!!24

Author notes

this poem makes no sence to me but if you get some vibe i didnt tell me about it! plus i was in a pretty angy mood when i wrote it i guess its kinda to my parent.....(sux to be them)

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  • laciegirl-11
    November 3, 2005
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    SHOCKED!

    Wow!! i didnt think you could ever sound mean!!!...i was wrong and i loved it you're totally awsome coolness "Shoulders" (lol thats still funnie) ne way i want more!! lol... love you lots! ha!

  • bloodless
    September 1, 2005
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    hi kate im ****** anymoose thanks for the compliment!!! im writting another soon so tell me what you think its going to be called "she" anymoose write me through this thing cus i only get on in java computer programming class and i cant email!!!

  • SecretsUnderMySkin
    August 25, 2005
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    omg i loved that you are a really good righter i think you are now one of my favorites good job *kate*

  • bloodless
    August 25, 2005
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    hows this!!!

  • SoCiAlLy--ExCePtEd
    August 24, 2005
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    YAY!!

    ~.....geez. i just cant compliment you enough...you are sooo good at writing. I am so lucky to be married to you!!!!! haha elohel....ttyl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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