Grandpa’s Knee1
Once upon a time in the land called Grandpa’s Knee, where only little boys’ and girls’ toys and animals could talk and see, lived “Hush” the puppy and “Sleep” the mother cat, and all kinds of things, imaginary. On Grandpa’s Knee it was snug and warm and little ones knew they would come to no harm for they were always wrapped in arms so strong and the Sandman never stayed away for long. Hush the puppy was as cute as could be with his white fury coat and his black patches for all to see. He was such a clever puppy for he would stand and widdle in Missy’s potty trainer when he went to the loo, now wasn’t that a clever thing to do? 2
He could roll and tumble over the floor and his little short legs would tangle with his big floppy ears and he would trip over them and hit his head on the door. His belly was round like a big basket ball, all pink and soft and not fury at all. He would run and bark at something you could not see, and try and bite off his tail and being so fat he would fall, “A” over “T”. When Grandma played the organ he would sing along but not in tune for he never knew the song. 3
Sleep the mother cat was different again with long silky fur of many colours, white, black, ginger and tan. She thought that she was a princess and would teach Hush to wash his face and behind his ears in a very cat like fashion. She would sit on Grandpa’s shoulder where Hush could not reach and purr and poke out her tongue at Hush, and his face would turn blue at her cheek. 4
When day was done and all was quiet and time to say their bedtime prayers, the little children would snuggle up on the land of Grandpa’s Knee and the Sandman would come and sprinkle his special stardust to help them sleep.5
Gramps would then say, “Hush now go to Sleep, it is time you went to bed too, for the Sandman will be on his way very soon.” 6
Hush would curl up in a little fat ball between Sleep’s legs and close his little puppy eyes, and dream of all the wondrous things he would do when he was as big like mother cat.7
And all would be safe and warm in the land of Grandpa’s Knee.8
Sammy 20059
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Thank you -G ... Your kind words and the Applause are very much appreciated.
Take care,
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Cleverly done
Whew!!! I havefinally made it back her after quite some time I know, but glad I am
I love the whole safe haven of Granpa's knee you came up with
Hopefull your poor leg doesn't get tired and fall asleep
Best wishes and congrats on your win as it was much deserved
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Thanks so much, TwoSidesofACoin ... I really appreciate your comment.
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This was tremendously sweet, just the kind of story that little ones would love to hear, and I at 30 loved it too! I love the fact you used rhyme throughout this story, it helped the flow and would make it easier for younger children to concentrate. Congreatulations on the trophy too K
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Uhhmmm... You take it slow baby! At least to start!
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An' leave that hat and vest on ... ya wont be needin' nothin' else!
Just take it slow to start with ...
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Yeehaw!!!
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Go now girl and put on some chaps and some spurs on your boots!
You've got some serious riding to do!
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OKay!!! Damn! I knew I should have worn panties this morning!!
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Out to the barn with you my girl!
A good tossing in the hay is what you need and a taste of Grandpa's cattle prodder!
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Well doggone it! If I show any signs of enjoyment then you can look for other ways to punish me!
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I am sure, young lady, that if you keep doing at Grandpa you will be put across his knee and given a spanking. Somehow though, I think you may enjoy that! You little minx!
from
Grandpa
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Actually, I probably need to be placed over Grandpa's knee because I am sure I did something deserving of a good spanking.
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There will always be room for you on Grandpa's Knee little Kimberly ... and we can talk about the first thing that pops up ...
Thank you for the ever so kind comments.
Sammy
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Awww... Move over kids, I wanna sit on Grandpa's Knee too! This was such a joy to read Sammy. I do love the way you spin a tale. I have discovered some very worthy and talented story writers lately. This is a wonderful bedtime story for childrenand adults alike! You are always so careful to implement and utilize so many of the fun things children love to hear about. I could certainly see myself enjoying ending the day with a tale such as this. "The land of Grandpa's knee"... a place where all is safe and warm, a place where there is nothing to fear or dread. A comfortable place to enjoy lots of delightful bedtime stories. Thank you for entering my contest Sammy. Good luck!
♥ Kimberly
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Thanks T O D for taking the time to comment. Much appreciated.
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love it!!!!!!!!!
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Thank you so much TSE ... I really appreciate your kind words.
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well done, sense stimulating, tkes you out of
I felt the warm I was the children I could smell Grampas smell and the puppies and the wet warm grass and all other things not even mentioned... excellently crafted -
Thank you Melonie for your very kind words.
Take care,
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Thank you dear Mal ... It brings joy to my heart when you visit ...
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Oh now this is magical one would love to take this journey of life. Has a warm and welcoming pose to the versing and story just fantastic work.
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Hi Sammy , this is absolutely lovley and beautifully put together. As always the weaver of dreams and who knows better than a grandparent. I remember many a happy bedtime story from my granpa's unlimited supply. God bless love and so glad to see you back.. Mega hugs ...mal
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Thanks Paul ...
You are correct ... it is A over T ... but hey .... this is a kids story ...
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Thank you my dear Katie ...
I treasure your comments.
Your Sammy
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Once again you have pened a wonderful story just one thing I thought it was A over T all the best
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Wonderful Children's Story!
What a wonderful bedtime story for children! it has all the fun things children love to hear about, it is a wonderful story that would put a perfect end to the day before sleeping, "the land of Grandpa's knee" a place where all is safe and warm, a place where there is nothing to be afeard of, just the knowledge of a loving Grandparent who knows lots of wonderful tales to tell.
Beautifully written Sammy
Always and Forever
~Katie~
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Di ... Thanks for coming by girl ... I really appreciate it ... Hope you are well ...
Sammy
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Thank you FT for your kind words ...
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Thank you Mistic, I appreciate your comment.
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sounds like a magical journey and a great place to be
loved this write and the warm feelings your words
gave me ..
best of luck in the contest
Blessing
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excellent
this is a wonderful change of poetry, children are so important,in the legacy of forgotten poetry.. -
aaaah sammy as always the dreamweaver and can feel the grandpa in you comin thru in this write...enjoyable and a different write for you...hugs di
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Thank you Munda for coming by to leave your kind and encouraging comments.
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A Keeper
This was such a pleasure to read! I really enjoyed the internal rhyme, although you seem to give up a bit at the end. Nonetheless readng this made me almost feel like a kid who was told a bedtime story. Great write!
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