The last time

Trapped like a bird in a cage, you are always facing things that cannot be conquered right away. Being locked up and never escaping from those that you once believed in.Putting all your trust and happiness in those that are around you, you wonder if this should be the right thing to do. Now, you're running away and trying to escape. 'I knew this would happen' you say as you make your way through the hallway. What have you done except put all your effort and hopes into one thing? When, later on, those who you thought would understand you just disappeared and betrayed you. After putting up with these problems you leave with your head high, knowing that even though you placed all your trust into those around you, you'll never make that mistake again. For this will be the last time that you fully trust those who appear to believe in you. Now, you walk out of this place with this new thought in your mind. The last thing that you expected to deal with, this will truly be the last time...

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Uh, well I was sitting outside and this came to me. It's based around my music teacher and everything that has gone on lately. I know it's sorta choppy but it was a 'Stream of Consciousness' kinda write.

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  • Rock-Out-Loud
    March 9, 2006
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    I have gone through this exsact thing. I put all my trust into one person, and then I was betrayed, it wasn't fun, and I never learned until about 2 years ago, that I really can't do that anymore, I really can't put all my trust into someone unless I really can, and unless I've known them for a long time, that I would be willing to give them my life to hold. This is touching, and I love it a ton, strong words and emotions, keep up the good writes

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  • xtootiex
    August 24, 2005
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    cool write hun. sad. x x x x