Victoria: hey Adam1
Adam: hey i got 2 talk 2 u2
Victoria: u already r lol3
Adam: well dis doesn’t count4
Victoria: k well go on5
Adam: …6
Victoria: u haven’t said anything 4 5 mins7
Adam: well Vic i don’t know wot 2 say8
Victoria: say wotev u need 2 say9
Adam: k. Vic i don’t think dis is workin out10
Victoria: wot do u mean???11
Adam: well wev been datin 4 a long time12
Victoria: only 4 2 months13
Adam: only? Dats a long time14
Victoria: no it isn't15
Adam: i think it is.16
Victoria: u nv think17
Adam: Vic im breakin up18
Victoria: u got no signal19
Adam: wot? No im breakin up wit u20
Victoria: …21
Adam: Vic r u there?22
Victoria: yeah23
Adam: did u understand wot I said24
Victoria: yeah25
Adam: alright. Maybe we should tlk 2 eachother n e more26
Victoria: not even as friendz27
Adam: no. im sorry it got to be dis way28
Victoria: y r u breakin up wit me? 29
Adam: i cant 30
Victoria: i luv u tho31
Adam: i kno32
Victoria: if i did somthin bad i’ll make up 4 it33
Adam: u did nothing wrong34
Victoria: then y r u leavin me? i luv u sooooo much35
Adam: i gtg36
Victoria: plz don’t go37
No Reply from Adam38
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Kate: Vic I got ur message. Y r u crying?40
Victoria: adam broke up wit me41
Kate: omg y?!42
Victoria: idk he nv told me43
Kate: when did he tell u44
Victoria: few hrs ago on txt45
Kate: he txt break up wit u?!46
Victoria: yeah. he did. 47
Kate: do u kno how bad dis is we got to tell everyone now48
Victoria: I don’t want everyone to kno he broke up wit me49
Kate: if we tell everyone he wont have anymore gfs50
Victoria: u sure? But i don’t want him 2 have a bad life51
Kate: he deserves it now52
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Victoria: omg kate im crying so hard now54
Kate: y? u saw adam today55
Victoria: i saw him wit mariah!56
Kate: u mean wit his ex57
Victoria: uh-huh58
Kate: u c now we tell everyone wot he did to u59
Victoria: u sure it will work?60
Kate: positivez61
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Kate: did u c him 2day63
Victoria: yeah64
Kate: did u c how all girls hatez him now65
Victoria: yeah66
Kate: r u happy tho67
Victoria: i still luv him a lot68
Kate: u deserve better after wot he did. Hes an a-hole69
Victoria: i guess70
Kate: wanna meet l8er71
Victoria: k72
Kate: meet u 4 ice-cream in 1073
Victoria: k74
Kate: k c ya there we can tlk75
Victoria: k c u there76
Author notes
I cannnot text. I just can't stand typos and all that stuff. My brain is melting from typing this LoLz.
Wow Adam broke up in text. He is going to hell for sure
If you think text message breakups (and/or computer breakups or phone breakups) are bad, please comment this.
Comment this overall though. It means a lot
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Guys who break up through texts are idiots. I agree with Elmeresia. I think that they should say it to the girl or at least call her, but that ain't good either. I think this is really cool and funny. I like how the girl got revenge on the guy. That's nice.
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thanks. yeah I agree with guys who break up through texts (or through a friend or computer) are idiots. It must feel horrible for that to happen to anyone.
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ugh, text break-ups. guys who do that don't have the balls to say it to the girl's face.
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LoLz nice way of putting that.
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ewww textmsg breakup. baad. lol love it!
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LoLz thanks
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Not breaking up through talking? Wow... who breaks up through a text? Though the words were simple, I thought it showed emotion and was pretty good.
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thanks
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Surpisingly
I didnn't like Katie that much myself in this. Even though it was pretty cruel for the boy to part with the girl without being there to give eye-contact, a much needed element when breaking a girl's heart, It was worse to try and turn everyone against him. Though heartbreak is the monsterous emotions, it also seemed hard fro Adam if he were to do it in text, but you also want to hate him as well. It seems like this type of thing depends on personal preferences and I enjoy that. It certainly kept me entertained-Casual and simple but with vivid emotions.
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