Night of dreams and power...I thought I seen you my angel once again!! But I know I seen your face... So handsome and so caring just lifts my heart to the sky but then your just a friend! Why did I have a dream of you when your not even too near? But you know what I haven't forgot you or the other person I like that's in my mind! 1
You always fade away but then you come back into my life. You bring me to wonder what's in your mind ought times, but I don't bother by asking because you don't talk to me or hear from you! I don't have any hard feelings for you but sometimes I have couple of questions to ask... However, I won't! Because the only place I'll see you is in my dreams, no where else!2
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****I had a dream, quite true!! I don't give up too easy, so don't doubt my poem
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I can relate to this one..really--as if you've read my mind. Its quite true how someone can be so close to your heart even when they are miles and miles away.
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Wow...you seemed to write the most heart felt poems i have ever read...this one is amazing...take care and keep writing...
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I think that you will find the guy in your dreams cause i found mine and i just have to try to keep him in and not leave me you know what i am talking about buddy
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Deep stuff!
Very sad...when your dreams won't come to life. precious poem/story...don't surrender those dreams, for gifts they are!!! I certainly cherish mine! Good work...vivid images. -
i loved it gr8t job onn it!!
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This was a very sweet poem. It's too bad that you wouldn't give reality a chance with your dream guy.
"Why did am I have a dream of you when your not even too near me?" You might want to leave out too. That left me a little confused. Otherwise I loved everything. Dreams are powerful and so is this poem! Thanks for sharing. Best wishes.
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Woah. I clicked on this expecting the usual but it was like out of nowhere. Awesome little peice here. First it was twilight zone then it was like oh I get it. Well yeah I enjoyed this good job keep it up.
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was that a dream you had? it was really good i loved it
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o.O hehe, I really liked this!, very creative to take a dream, and write about it, keep up the great work!, and best of luck to you ~love always~
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you never know you could always see them in real life,
truly you never know. so don't give up, because that just waste that opportunity with them.
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