Staters

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Just before the bend of the freeway, two college guys holding a sign that read, “STATE COPS AHEAD”. What a helpful thing to do, I thought. I immediately sped up, sometimes they give tickets for driving 45 on the freeway. A few minutes later the two young men were ticketed for obstructing justice…go figure. 2

By Dee Garner3

August 22, 2005

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This was a 55 word story contest... Obviously I didn't win.
This really happened in Olympia, Washington near where I-16 starts off I-5. Sure makes a person wonder, huh.

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  • fathom me
    August 1
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    A moment.. Captured. More like these?

  • Wesley Storer
    April 11

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    Yes I have heard they do!

    What a good little story. Perhaps if they had phrased their sign with a little more diploymacy. Happy Spring Time.


    • catz
      April 11
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      For some reason it keeps telling me there's 'no comment' when I try to applaud your comment, so doesn't accept the applause. I'll try again later and in the meantime here's some for you

      Thanks for your comment and also for the nice one you left on my guestbook

  • pozo
    May 18, 2007

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    Good piece. Makes you worry about government laws and such though Ah- governments are idiots.
    Pozo


    • catz
      June 10, 2007
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      Thank you, pozo. I tend to agree with you about governments a great deal of the time. You'd think they would appreciate a little help in slowing speeders, wouldn't you.


      Mom

  • EvenStarsFade
    February 18, 2007
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    Thats freaking hillarious! Can they ticket them for that? Damn youd think it would fall under freedom of speech or something.
    If that were me though, I'd think the story I could tell forever was worth the price of the ticket!


  • February 15, 2006
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    excellent

    Great job in 55 words exactly...makes you wonder about our government though....poor guys I kinda feel bad for them...to try and do something good for others and you get shot down...was funny though

  • Blushfulmoon
    September 14, 2005
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    excellent~

    Cute n clever
    Hope you got a trophy for this one
    Love n hugs
    Susan~~~


  • September 10, 2005
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    you cant win..lol why


  • Ray Von
    August 25, 2005
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    Cool, in just fiftyfive words you have done an excellent job!!! He he it was funny too.... all in all I give it an 11 out of ten!!!!
    Maria

  • Anna Goose
    August 23, 2005
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    LOL... I don't know what is funnier...going 45 on the freeway or the Do-Gooders getting a ticket.


  • in exile
    August 23, 2005
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    oh...it's really funny and perfect....no can beat u,WUHOO!
    good luck!
    ~~ille


  • August 22, 2005
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    This is cute sometimes a person can mean so well and it goes againist them lol.. Sherry


  • catz
    August 22, 2005
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    And yes, they were from Evergreen College


  • catz
    August 22, 2005
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    I used to live in Olympia, Susan, then in Seattle for several years ...now I'm in Phoenix and I miss the northwest so much, rain and all.
    Dee


  • SusanL
    August 22, 2005
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    yep 55 words.
    I did not realize we were such close neighbors!
    That is too funny! I wonder if they were from Evergreen it seems the kind of thing a gueduck would do don't you think!
    You have brought humor to this competition and that is a good thing.
    Not every moment is somber or the greatest day of our life, but life is made up of moments such as these as well.
    thank You
    Susan

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