Better When Blind

"SWEETIE, so n-e-e-d-y....but
They"re
b
e
t
t
e
r when ►{BLiND}◄
•.•.•.•.•.•.•.•.•.•.•.•.•.•.•.•.•.•.•.•.•.•
Have you learned the l•e•s•s•o•n yet, cHiLd
[B▬e▬c▬a▬u▬s▬e that's all YOU are]
How
Can
You
"""Say"""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""
It
Doesn"t
Hurt
When
You
C.R.I.E.D
Yourself
To
Sleep
Again?
""""Never thought to rename J.a.n.u.a.r.y""
(OH! Yes, I "said" that out ◄LO-UD► )
You&&Me
Me&&You
Forgetting ►►►►►►►►►►►► That there's
a b s o l u t e l y......n o......c h a n c e
on God's green E_A_R_T_H________no______
But-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-What can you possibly do
WHEN THE little THINGS
S
T
A
R
TO mean so MUCH
when Getting oğuğtğ of Bed in the
morning is no longer e.f.f.o.r.t.l.e.s.s and
the n+ig+h+t that I l.o.v.e.d wanted to kill
me in the ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ .end.
ever just wanted to end it all??
It's easier than keeping your heart( ♥ )locked
in a cage
"take care of my heart i've left it with you"
░░░░░░░T.H.O.S.E were the░░░░░░░
last "w"o"r"d"s" he said
before he left me alone
and
waving
that
star
spangled
rag

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  • DanceTheNightAway
    February 10

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    that was so cool! it was a great poem story thingy, even though i didnt really understand it. i loved the format though. =D i must say, the way you wrote it ROCKED. awesome write!


  • codename
    August 18, 2009

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    that was soo cute. i love the end when she waved the spangle rag. it was a very sweet poem. i like the little pictures. i love how you made this poem have a hidden meaning like abstract art.
    do you like shakesphere(spelled wrong)?

    beginning: 2, plot: 3, ending: 4, characters: 3.


    • Giovanna Corvis
      August 18, 2009
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      I love shakespeare actually!! And thank you for reading and commenting!

      -Andi


  • Le Masquerade silver member
    August 5, 2009

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    This is AWESOMELY RANDOM! I loved it! Great job, love the writting style


  • Everpurple
    August 3, 2009

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    YES!!! This is art in words. And I love the surrounding pictures. That's the kind of photography I want to ---anyways.
    Thank you for entering my contest! This is really cool. And I get it. Boys are lazy like that...But I've got high expectations and black nail polish so...yeah I loved it.


  • ForgiveAndRemember gold member
    July 21, 2009
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    ???i dont get it?????


    • Giovanna Corvis
      July 21, 2009
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      no one ever gets my poems because I cants say things out straight. Basicallyt the idea was men are better when they cant see all of your problems and feel like they have to fix them or blame themselves. They're better when they dont know how you feel, when you can control yourself enough to keep them blind...you get the idea.

      -Andi


  • Cinderella.
    July 19, 2009
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    Different, bit great


  • Caradoc gold member
    July 7, 2009

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    I liked it, but was somewhat thrown off by the format and such. It's actually kind of sad. It reminds me of the movie Heartbreak Ridge. Good poem you have here.


  • DarkOneShadow
    July 6, 2009

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    Huh... confusing

    I know that this is related to the fourth of July, but the part that confuses me is that it seems to be personally driven as well.

    I hope that you explain to me the inner workings of this poem.

    DarkOneShadow

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