Winter

Silent as the snow1

Irresistible to me2

I take in the scene3

We lay together4

Side by side in the silence5

It falls around us6

He reaches for me7

His warm fingers touch my skin8

His hand holds the snow

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  • Asfand
    July 8

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    Great use of creating a beautiful scene!

    Good luck! And thank you for your entry!

    Great job!

    - Asfand