The Main Course Is You

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All the tastes in the world
The rich flavored world
Could never taste as good as you
Under the steamy sunlit sky
Your skin a shade of golden brown
Your eyes deep blue as the sea
Two lips, full of vibrant passion
How splended you would look
Cooling down in my kitchen
Your bittersweet sauce
Oozing down my fingertips
Would you like to join me for dinner?
The main course is you.3

Author notes

I think I am on some kind of dark high.
I know where the idea for this short poem came from.
EPO..damn girl what you gotta go get stuck in my head XD

Blair

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  • Uniquely-Scarred
    July 8

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    wooo scary if you think about that kindly old man, i liked this nice and dark, and because you say the main course is you, it could be translated as being the reader, i really liked this there is a lot of depth in this small piece take care


  • Caradoc
    July 8

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    Ooo....nicely done. I am a fan of Aspasia's writing and this poem certianly fits into that genre well. What really makes it dark is the fact that it could be from the point of view of some wicked monster or the kindly old man living next door.

    great job!


  • Andiness
    July 6

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    I think SOMEONE is into cannabalistic (sp?) writing lately, no?

    You do it very nicely as with all of your writing. I enjoyed reading it.

    -Andi


  • MsAlee gold member
    July 6
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    Very good and well written. I would almost say someone has been reading Aspasia77's stories.


    • Prodigious.Mirth gold member
      July 6

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      Not at all.
      Well I have been reading them.
      But I wrote the poem before reading.
      The idea came from eyes pried open and her story extra meat.
      I scare myself XD

      • MsAlee gold member
        July 6
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        LOL, i haven't read that one yet. i have a whole list of stories i plan on reading tomorrow so i can try to win a silver or gold week membership.


  • MsAlee gold member
    July 6
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    Very good and well written. I would almost say someone has been reading Aspasia77's stories.


  • Violette silver member
    July 5

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    Hahahaha omg that was a great and rather spooky way to end a poem. Nice work, great description and use of flow.

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