Together we fall down onto the lounge room floor1
Both laughing after a night out on the town2
You catch me just before I land 3
Hold me in a lover’s embrace4
I am dressed in a nice long sexy slinky black dress5
Your hands graze gently over my body6
Knowing no underwear will be found7
Your warm tender hands have been teasing me all night8
A soft touch here, a playful grab there9
You hold the back of my head, 10
Your fingers entwine through my hair11
Hot wet lips eagerly touching mine12
In a gentle kiss13
As your tongue caresses my lips it protrudes within14
Softly raking over my tongue15
Across my teeth 16
And I gently suck it17
Now it turns into deep passion18
Tongues locking together19
Lips wantonly seeking out the other20
My eyes slightly open and see straight into yours21
Your hand, worn with time and hard work22
Yet still smooth and gentle23
Moves from my cheek 24
Over my neck25
So soft and sensually down over my breast26
You peel back the layer of soft material27
My back arches28
You slid the strap from my shoulder29
Exposing my breasts30
I feel your warm hand cupping31
Whilst your fingers gently tweak my hardening nipple32
Your mouth moves to my now out stretched neck33
Licking and softly biting34
Ever so slowly down35
You nibble at my shoulder36
I look down and see wondrous eyes of blue37
Looking up to mine with that cheekiness38
That sparkle that you get when devouring me39
You smile, and your eyes light up with excitement 40
Knowing how far you will take me41
Your hands travel down my out stretched body42
That quivers with anticipation43
Slowly, softly44
You push my dress down my body 45
As my back arches away from the ground46
Your tongue moves down over the softness of my breast47
Licking in circles48
Such sensual circles49
As you reach my nipple, now hard and erect from your touch50
You gently suckle it51
Tease it with your tongue52
Whilst looking up at me you gently bite it53
Teasing it until it can grow no harder54
Your hand cups my breast 55
Forcing every sensual sense to it’s peak56
My clit has started to throb57
I can feel wetness starting to seep58
Your tongue and lips graze my ribs59
I feel you nip at that area above my hips60
As you lick and suck once again I quiver61
That sense between pleasure and pain62
That excites and tantalizes so much63
Before the folds of material have uncovered me64
You rub across my mound and between my legs65
My hips are rolling66
Lifting to meet your touch67
Your finger ever so slightly touches my bud68
Sending electricity through me69
I moan70
Your mouth returns to mine71
In a hot excited kiss72
You feel the moisture through my dress73
And slowly74
Ever so slowly 75
You push it away76
Down 77
Over my legs78
Now it is just me79
Naked 80
Wanting81
Needing your touch82
Your kiss
Author notes
ok got to excited to continue this so decided to do a couple of parts story thingy.
write rest real soon but would love to know what you guys think
What did you think? Please comment!
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Love it very much!
ur very descriptive, taking the reader by the hand walking them through this .....ur wonderland! xxx -
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh great write hirl!
Tash
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Wonderful
as much as I DID NOT want to know bout your sex life, this was a WONDERFUL write ma. You done a terrific job!!! Keep it up!
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Dios Mio!!!HOTTTT... Already bought my ticket to Part Two... yeh baby!!! Fun stuff, skillfully written.
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OOHH Mia, is this what you get up to on the weekends? my, you've even got granpa steamed up!
all those cold showers he must take.Now, when is part two due out? I've gotta read the rest of this! HMMMMMMMM no wonder my hair turned grey 
Hugs AJ
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Hi mia........good morning girl.....such an exciting piece full of passion.....now I am the one for the cold shower.....very tasteful hon in the words....visulization is so real......Brian..... ....
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Wow, hahahaha... You have no idea how turned on you just made me hahahahahaha... Great job my friend. Great job. hahaha. I need to go get my man friend. hahaha. WOO hahaha
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this is a great write mia keep up the great work it works out and so enticing you are hotter then lava
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Dear Mia,
Have you been reading Touchof1der lately? I often have to go have a cold shower after I've read one of hers and now I've gotta go have one from reading this.
And you are my No.1 grandawter!! I daren't show this to grandma or she'll pull the plug on my PC!! Applause.
(Hurry up with episode #two willya?)
An' it's not even in a contest!!
Love and hugs, XXX Granpa. -
Please continue!
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GULP...
Please continue...I wanna see this through your words completely. I consider it a 'learnin experience'. It is touching, and sensual, but classy. Is it hot? FLAMING BABY!
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