Delayed

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Delayed, story of my life.2

Home lies one more flight away, I just hope it’s still there.3

No answer now for two days, I knew I should not have taken this trip.4

My, son, my daughter, my world has slipped away because I could not see past myself.5

This leopard needs to change his spots.6

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  • TooRainbow
    August 22, 2005
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    Great job! The tone is so anxious--difficult to get an emotional response from your readers in so few words, but you did it with finesse. Very nice entry. Good luck in the contest!
    Sheryl