Light purple feathers fly along the gentle breeze in the winters night,silence among the land as fighting stops between two human species of myths...Neko Vs Angels.As the blood of two lovers is shed by the hatred of others hearts...Crimson tears run down their cheeks,as their eyes gaze and their smiles soften from the pain of dying...Love now returning to the frozen heart of the land.1
"Whats that big wall over their for,father?"2
"Suza...I told you already.No one can speak of what it is for!"3
"But father, aren't i old enough to know now?"4
"NO!!!!Your only 10, you wont understand till your older!!"5
"Then when will that be?"6
"Never..."7
This is...Well where it started, I was 10 years old and knew secrets were being kept...I was,well the only one who didn't know what that stupid wall was about-or what was beyond it on the other side either.8
I only just started growing my wing,(yes..I am an angel,even if i don't seem like one)...So to many people,I was just a kid who didn't know any better,but I was much smarter than they realised!!!9
To keep my father pleased,I decided to ignore it as much as possible...Which worked for about 3 years tops,(maybe abit longer?).10
"I'm going out for abit,ok!"11
"Don't be out too long!"12
"Ok,ok".13
I decided, that I was going to find out,what was behind that wall...Little did I realise that guards would be patrolling the entrance of the forest...Leading to that stupid wall!14
'Damn!Ok,just stay calm...Find an opening...THERE!!!'15
"Hmm,did you see something just then?"16
"No,must be your eyes".17
"Yeah,your probably right".18
"Man...That was lucky".19
As you can imagine,in a huge forest like 'night' forest,your bound to get lost...(Didn't I pass that tree already?).Anyway,I was about to give up on my search,when I saw a pair of dark brown ears,(like a cats?).20
"Umm, excuse me?"21
"Huh...Er me?"22
"Your,your a...DUDE!!!"23
His head pops up from behind the bush...Surprising me so much I fall to the ground!I never seen a human with ears or by that matter a tail in my LIFE!!!(Though it was sooooo cute!!!).He walked up to me,but cautiously,like he never saw an angel before in his life...He held out his hand and said so calmly,"Are you alright?"24
I couldn't help but blush...I couldn't even speak!!!25
"Er,hello...Are you alright?"26
"oh,oh yes thank you".27
"Um,whats your,er..name?"28
"Suza,and yours is?"29
"Oh,I'm Kiyoshi..." 30
We sat there,talking for ages,I found out that he was a species of human called neko's,that ironically lived on the other side of the wall...We decided that no matter what others think,we'll be best friends till death and meet everyday from then on.31
Over the years,we met in the same place and the same time...I lost my mother when I turned 15,she never had much say in anything to do with me...We wasn't even allowed to speak to each other...Yet even while I was crying over her death,Kiyoshi,stayed right by my side,comforting me through my sorrow...My feelings started to change towards him,as I learnt more about him and his people.32
"Suza..."33
It was then on a bitter cold night in the middle of winter,when he spoke three simple words,"...I love you".34
Those words lite my heart with so much warmth,I forgot about the world around me...All I saw was him,Kiyoshi...The love I never thought was possible...35
Kiyoshi,I promise...I'll never leave you,even in death... 36
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Comments
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I like this a lot. I love that she's an angel, its more original. A few words were misspelled, and the ellipses (.....) are a little overused, but I dont have a problem with this at all.
Thank you for entering XD

