Here is Matt. Matt is 10 years old, he has short dark brown hair. He is 10 feet tall and weighs 900 pounds. He is incredibly strong and super smart. He can breath with no air. He wants to be a spaceman when he grows up. 1
20 years later Matt is up in space. Matt is in the International Space Station doing lots of experiments. He's exploring a bunch of galaxies in a lost alien ship. It is gray, it has a glass top. It is just big enough for Matt to fit in it. It has only two control pads. 2
Matt is traveling with a friend. Matt calls his friend buddy. He is almost as tall and strong as Matt. He is a little bit smarter than Matt so he helps him on his mission.3
In the 20th galaxie Matt is going to run into some problems with the owners of the alien ship. ALIENS!!! ATTACK!!! 4
The aliens are ten times smaller than Matt. They are green with purple antennaes. Their antennaes are like phones. They use a different form of communication than humans. They send messages via chemicals through their antennaes to other aliens of their species. These communication chemicals are very powerful. They can be used against humans and other aliens during a battle. If humans breath in the chemicals it give the aliens control over you for one move. The aliens are a solitary species that usually live individually on planets across the 20th galaxy from the milky way but they group together to go into battle. One hundred (100) of the aliens have joined forces against Matt to get back their spaceship. 5
Matt and his friend, Buddy, notice that the aliens are now surrounding the ship from every direction. Matt uses the secret button that he found at the back of the ship to turn off the power. Matt and Buddy, then use their super powers to leave the powerless ship without the aliens noticing. Matt and Buddy, watch from a distance as the aliens sneak onto the ship. When the aliens turn on the ship, it doesn't work. Matt and his friend laugh and laugh and laugh. The aliens decide to leave the ship since it doesn't work and head back home.6
Matt and Buddy travel back home to Earth with the alien ship. Now they can use the alien ship whenever they want to expore space again.7
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THE END!
Comments
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That's a great story you typed up, congrats! I like how you described what's going and how you used paragraphs. It's very simple and easy to understand. Type up more stories, and I'm sure people would love them.
Talk to you later,
Skye 15
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Aww it was really good. I'm actually amazed. When I was seve there was no way I would share my writting. If you keep this up you may become a great writer.
Later
Mimi

beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


