the key to success [revised]

She grabbed his penis, with a quick bite she soon had what she needed. He swooned. Left alone, in the center of the darkness that hung in his bedroom. He stood where he would die. Without a penis, life isn't worth the hard work.
She arrived at her lair, hung the penis on the wall and marvelled at her hard work.  10 3in penis's now decorated her wall. 1

The end.

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