Crazy Pirate Dance

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Ok I tried this one but I am not very good at it.

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  • Mamabekaboo
    August 24, 2005
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    THANKS

    Thank you for the applaud. I appreciate it. This one was really hard to put into words for me. I loved trying to figure out what words went where and if they fit the poem. It was tough. Thanks again.
    Beka


  • TheWordSlinger
    August 24, 2005
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    "nincompoop offenders" Exquisite!!!!!!!!!
    Paggles


  • angelica
    August 23, 2005
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    There is nothing wrong with your ABC poem, it's hard sometimes finding the right words, I enjoyed reading it very much.
    Hugs angelica

  • Mamabekaboo
    August 22, 2005
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    Wonderful Contest giver!

    Thank you. This was really tough. Those last three words had me for quite a while. Thank you for the comment and the applause. Bekaboo

  • Touchof1der
    August 22, 2005
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    This had me giggling and the end... Oi Vey!! That is a toughie! But... you have risen to the challenge in a most delightful way and shared your talent and creativity and spirit of willingness to step out of your comfort zone. I like that! I appreciate that more than anything else about this contest. Thank you for taking the time and making the effort to enter. Good luck!!
    ♥ Kimberly

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