Again

I shift awkwardly,1

Repeating what I had said,2

"I win again!"3

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Creeping in night air,5

The pack is hunting again,6

Wolves stalk silently7

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Pitter, patter: rain,9

The sun will peek through the clouds,10

and once more will set11

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Thank you for reading my haiku! 13

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I got bored so I entered a contest...

A contest entry

I got bored.....

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  • Asfand
    July 8

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    The last one is gorgeous! I like the wolves, but it's overdone, rather. Still, nicely done!

    Good luck! And thank you for your entry!

    Great job!

    - Asfand