Gorgey Times A Hundred1
Saturday, 4th July
4:24 p.m.
I was innocently resting in my pit of sleepiness (known to most as my bedroom) when the Black Sheba herself (My best friend Bella) knocks on my window. She was clearly in a fit of black shebaness, because to get to my room you have to climb up the drain-pipe. I opened the window.
"Bella." I said "Why couldn't you have come through the front door?" Well that was obvious. She was in a state a madnosity.
"Oh. I figured this way was muchos dramatic, amigo"
Sigh. I was not in the mood for the sheba's shenanigans.
"Right. So. What's happening in Bellaland, ma petit un?"
"I. Have. Met. THE most hunky guy. He is Gorgey Times A Hundred." Bella grinned. Then tripped over a shoe.
"Dignitosity-at-all-times, eh Bella?" She then threw a book at me.2
5:27 p.m.
Thinking about this Gorgey Times A Hundred guy that Bella's met. Wondering if he would like (lurve) me. But no. I must respect the code of silent girl dibs.3
One minute later.
But, if he liked me then I could do nothing about it could I? And then I would be forced, against my will, to go out with him. Mwah hahahaha. Freyja, you are vair vair clever.4
One minute later.
Do you think Bella with find out about my evilll plan? Because that would be not marvy nor groovy. 5
5 minutes later.
Arhhh. She's going to find out. She will hate me forever and I'll be a lonely loner with only sheep as my friends...6
1 second later.
Although I don't know how I'll get hold of a sheep in the middle of London.7
37 seconds later.
Then I'll be a lonely loner with no sheep...8
3 seconds later.
Wow. All this thinking is making my head heard. Going to watch documentaries about hamburgers on the motion-box. 9
Sunday 5th July.
Sometime In The Afternoon.10
Bella showed me a picture of Gorgey Times A Hundred. I'm acting like a care bear on jelly (or jelleh as the black sheba says.) Bloody hell. He's a God in Trousers. 11
3 minutes later.
Actually he was wearing shorts. So he's a God In Shorts. Damn it. Why did she have to meet him first? Humph. Going home for emergency meditation.12
20:45 p.m Plan to meet Gorgey Times A Hundred commences tomorrow. This task is going to require elephants of secretrivicy...13
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He must be one hunkalicious guy! 
. I look forward to ‘seeing’ more of your novel.
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I’m surprised but I could understand what your young ladies were saying and comprehend it—good job on the dialogue 
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Geri (greeter).
I think the characters and they way they think are going to make this an interesting story, even though the chasing of the hot young male storyline has been used before. There's always room for a new take on everything. 
