Caden [9]

That's stupid.
She's putting you in therapy
because you got into a
fight?


So I wasn't telling
Eric
the whole story.
Like that I'd tried
suicide.
But that wasn't his
business,
it was personal.1

I know man,
told you she was
a bitch.2

How are you even going
to deal with six weeks
of going to a shrink?3

That's something that
I'd even been asking myself.
I hate talking to people
except for Eric,
and Kerry.
So this big shot:
Dr. Mullins
certainly wasn't going to
get much.4

I really
don't know.
But dude,
how are you?
I feel like we haven't
talked in forever.5

I know.
Um,
well,
I'm seeing someone
now.6

Seeing someone?
Eric?
Eric couldn't be seeing
someone. Someone
might be seeing Eric,
but it could never be
the other way.7

Who?8

Her name is
Janice.
She was over
right before you
came, actually.9

Interesting.
Janice,
could be anyone;
could be a man.
I had to meet
Janice.10

But that would have to wait,
because my first therapy
session was only
two hours away. 11

Wish me luck.12

You're going early.13

Yeah, well,
gotta make a good
first impression,
right?14

We laughed. 15

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  • Queen Mab gold member
    July 31

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    Oh--I wish he'd trust his friend enough to spill all. He's going to be feeling a little lost now, now that Eric has another person in his life that might make Caden feel the need to take a back seat. I hope Eric's relationship doesn't ruin their friendship. I'm looking forward to the shrink scenes. Can't wait to see Caden's reaction to the situation and I'm still holding out the hope that this guy will help.

    ~Mab


  • therenaissancegirl
    July 30

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    Eric better freaking NOT be straight or I'll have to punch him in the face for Caden (my inner yaoi fan is dying right here!). Eric is, like, a piece of chocolate pie in the midst of a life full of broccoli florets--or something like that and they better hook up or else. On another note, therapy's gonna be a ball. Whether it comes in the form of a big soft beach ball or a small hard golf ball--or maybe even a bouncy, painful basketball--well, I guess I'll find out in part 10, won't I?


  • Reaver Greeters member
    July 24
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    This was a total turn from teh last one. Simple friends. Great work!


  • Mad Ink
    July 23
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    Janice is interesting. I wonder who she or he is. It's good to see that Caden can make a joke. It seems that his life has been all depression, which it has.

  • tearrsofthemoon
    July 13

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    i'm interested to see who Janice is, if she is a freind of Kerry. Or something along those lines. Onto the next!

  • IfYouSeeHer
    July 4

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    agh. been reading through all of this and love it absolutely to bits. it's gritty without being overly melodramatic.


  • Sidewalk Avenue
    July 4

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    Tharapy. That should be interesting to read about.

    I love the way you're writing the story in prose very much and the concept of the story's great.

    Good job.


  • BlamedRobin
    July 4

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    Therapy will be one hellofa ride. I'm sure of it. I'mkind of sadnow that Eric has a girl now...Let's just hope that Eric is lieing to see what he could get from Caden. It will be dissapointing to me if Eric isn'tlieing though. -Shrugs- Oh well. This was good anyway. -Smiles-


  • Asfand
    July 4

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    Therapy will be very interesting. Nice, I like this chapter a lot! Rather light-hearted. Incorporating humor is as important as the moral itself, so kudos on this one!


  • DeniseC silver member
    July 4

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    The ending of this chapter made me grin. As everyone said, I can't wait to see more about Janice, also how Caden feels of his therapy and his reaction. I have no idea how you wrote this one, Kevan. I could never write something like this.

    Good job again! As always.
    Denise


  • seasonsoflove silver member
    July 4

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    Cant wait to see how the therapy goes! Good addition to the story here. Keep it up, Kevan. Can't wait to read more!


  • the back row
    July 4
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    Great update. I can't wait to see the scene with the therapist, and to see more about Janice.

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