Advent Zelousy

Angry banter,1

chaotic destruction,2

easy for greeting,3

hard introduction4

Junction's kimset,5

lying mean,6

never oppose,7

people's queen8

Resulting society9

trouble's underlay10

very worrying,11

xenophobe yesturday12

...Zeal...13

Author notes

society is dying in greed and corruption. It must be known to all so that we can take measures to make it better. Enjoy the poem.

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  • angelica
    August 23, 2005
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    You did a wonderful job on you ABC poem and you rhymed it too, fantastic, we can make a difference if we all pull together.
    Hugs angelica

  • Touchof1der
    August 21, 2005
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    Goodness! I never expected so many great entires and to find one that even rhymes is just really mind boggling. I am quite impressed, needless to say. You have certainly unleashed your creative spirit and allowed it to flow across the page here. Thank you for accepting the challenge and entering my contest with such a fine entry. Good luck!
    ♥ Kimberly


  • twinzy001
    August 21, 2005
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    I think you did a great job with your a to z and nice rhyming!


  • TheWordSlinger
    August 21, 2005
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    Excellent

    This one looks like it stands a very good chance. Way to rhyme under such circumstances!!