A-Z Warning (HIGHLY IMPORTANT)

A-Z Warning (HIGHLY IMPORTANT)1

Alligator biting causes deadly enigmatic flea gatherings. Having infected joints kept loosely moving not optimum. Please quarantine recalcitrant subjects thwarting undesirable venues weaseling xenobiotic yammering zygotes.2

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Wow! Nope didn't even try to ryhme. Went for bigger words instead. FOr some reason my head hurts now. lol!

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  • insertcleversn
    August 22, 2005
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    interesting...

    great job! all the sentences are grammatically (well almost) correct. just had a little problem understanding some words...heh like the zygotes (?) and xenobiotic (?) and recalcitrant (?!?!?!?!?)...yeah. so anyways, good luck with the contest!

  • simpliterature
    August 22, 2005
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    Amazing. Few new words in my vocabulary. You took the challenge quite well... thanks for sharing.


  • Mamabekaboo
    August 21, 2005
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    Wowzers

    This is hilarious in the fact that you were able to do that!!!
    Two thumbs WAY UP LOL

  • Touchof1der
    August 21, 2005
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    WoW! I am sooo cracking up over this. You certainly took this further than I expected anyone to go with such creative and unusual words. I am so pleased you chose to accept the challenge and entered my contest. Thank you for creating such a delightful piece. Good luck!
    ♥ Kimberly

    I also want to thank you for putting the white background behind the words. My eyes thank you as well! The background fits but it sure would have made reading a bear!

  • duana
    August 21, 2005
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    wow that was good. Now I want you to have your five year old kid memorize it, and do it for show and tell time at school. lol

  • CarterTachikawa
    August 21, 2005
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    All right, that's all 24 letters there! The background does make it a little hard to read though. But at least the important part (the entry itself) is readable and I enjoyed it. Remind me never to try and feed an alligator. I'll leave that to the experts (and the nutjobs).

    ~CT


  • twinzy001
    August 21, 2005
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    haha good job

  • Lyrical Soul
    August 21, 2005
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    LOL You really did step up to this challenge didn't you? Very funny and very creative. Good luck in the contest.

    ~Lyrical


  • angelica
    August 21, 2005
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    W W Melissa, this is great, gotta be careful of those Alligators.

    Hugs Joan

  • Gingetsuryuu
    August 21, 2005
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    9.5/10

    Wow! Great work! You managed to almost perfectly change it. Its still a bit hard to read and grasp at places, but still readable. Well done!


  • TheWordSlinger
    August 21, 2005
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    Excellent

    Very Good indeed, My brain hurts too.

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