I lied down on my bed and looked out the window. Everything was black. The stars looked dull. I sighed.1
The night sky was like my life, full of darkness and no hope. Bad family relationships and no happiness and joy in my life. Also an outcast, I was always beaten at school. Thats the reason why i have a scar across my left eye. So my bangs are on the left side, to cover that scar, and to also hide my tears. I always cried myself to sleep. I have lots of cuts. No doubt. Im an emo. Well, thats what everyone says. I turned around and looked at the clock. Sigh. Another 4 hours left till school starts again. I wasted another night, no, more like, 3 months of my summer vacation crying about the unfairness in my life. Ugh. Im tired. Made another cut on my arm.2
Author notes
My first story, hope u guys like it. I named the title "237 Promises" because i was with my bf for 237 days (not sure about the states but here in korea the number of days are really important;
and i thought i would like to write a story based on my love life. Well, actually only the 237 promise thingy. The rest is fiction 
lol miss my bf;;
Comments
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I like it, go on!
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I understand what you are going through.
But there is a hope.
There's someone out there, who can help you, and is always with you.
You've tried everything to make you happy again. Maybe sex, drugs, drinking, etc etc. It doesn't seem to work.
I have found something that does work.
It fills the hole you feel inside your heart.
Send me a message if you want to find out more.
Don't worry, I'm totally trust-worthy. It's alright.
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I love you all.
Keep it up, stay strong.beginning: 2, language: 2, plot: 3, ending: 3, dialog: 2, characters: 2.
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