Have you ever had that day where you hate the world and want to kill your self? I do all the time. I bet you think I'm emo, well I hate to disappoint you but I'm not. I guess I started hating life when I moved away from my old home. My friends disappeared, as well as my personality. We all promised to keep in contact, what a lie that was. I would message them and never get a reply. Only once, and that's when she told me how she has a new best friend. That especially hurt since she used to call me her best friend. I have been replaced. I tried to make friends at my new school but apparently I'm what they call an 'easy target'. So that's when the bullying began. I now hide in the bathrooms, hoping that no one will find me...unfortunately they do. They bang on the doors and I tearfully choke at them to leave me alone. They laugh and continue until the bell rings. They reluctantly leave, chuckling as they pull my bag out from under the cubicle. I cry as my cell phone and my wallet are in there. I hug my knees as I try to get a hold of myself. I turn up to class late. I get yelled at by the teacher and students laugh as they see my tear stained cheeks. My mother gets a phone call. The teacher explains to her how I have been late to class a lot. I get told off. I'm too weak to tell her what happened. I get sent to my room. 1
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Wrote this while listening to BlessTheFall
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Awww this is sooo sad, i realy feel the pain in this and all the emotion! poor girl! luckly i have never been bullied and i hate it when people do bully. it must be soooo tough for that girl! i just want to giver her a massive hug lol
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That would be horrible. You accurately portayed what happens to lots of kids on a day to day basis. You really made me feel sorry for the character and want to help them. It seems a lot of your current stories have been inspired by the song BlessTheFall, I think I will head on over to youtube and have a listen. -
Yeah...I really hate teenagers...Seriously, in way those that die in wars are lucky. Teenagers torment you for years without end, until you either give in and off yourself, (which i don't recommend because then they win)or you fight back. It's what made Columbine happen. And people say, oh those kids were murderers and horrible for doing that. Yeah it was bad that they killed people but seriously, stop and think about what pushed them past their breaking point.
In my opinion, I would go with Rorshach's advice. Wear a mask though so they have no idea who did it. Just don't kill them. Killing is bad.
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Awww omg this is so sad it makes me want to cry. what a sad life they have
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This is so sad. It almost brought tears to my eyes and trust me, when I read something and that happens to me, it's something special!!! I love your writing, and hope you continue.
CT222
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Very sad. This was how it was for me too when I moved. Everyone thought I was the easy target, but I never let them hurt me. Instead I only hurt myself by not telling anyone, but as everyone says "That's life" I just continue to get hurt, but don't do anything about it. Noones bigger than you. They could bully you all they want, but they know you'll fight back eventually. The best advice I could give the character in this story is that life's like this. You just have to toughen up although it doesn't help much. Do whatever you can to make them stop. I'm not saying fight,but if it's neccessay do it. Take a good swing too. Show them that your ready for a fight. That your willing to take a stand. Never let anyone bully you around.
It's not fair..
It's amazing how I can give this advice, but I'm never willing to use it. lol. Like the guy below me said you have to be strong in school and the real world is just as bad. Life is basically a fight, so get fighting. That's the only way you'll win.
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Very sad tale about being bullied. I didn't exactly have a great time at school myself so I can sympathise. If I could give the character in the story some advice this is what i'd say.
The only way to beat the bullies is to pick out the leader, wait until they are on their own, then kick the crap out of them. If they are bigger and stronger than you then cheat. Sneak up on them, or do whatever you have to do. Nobody tells you this, but it sure worked for me. You have to be strong in school and the real world is just as bad. Life is basically a fight, so get fighting.
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