This darkness won't leave my mind,It lingers.1
It's runs through to my toes and my fingers,2
I stomp, scream, cuss and shout,3
But silence fills, no sound comes out, 4
I feel nothing other than anger and hate,5
My feelings come through and makes me shake,6
I try to wipe my teary eyes,7
My blank expression is my disguise,8
People think attention is what I seek,9
What I want is to not be a freak,10
I want to be in control of my own life,11
That's when I turned towards the knife,12
The pain slices through and clears my head,13
It makes me want to be alive...no longer dead,14
When I cut I feel protected,15
Because when I'm insulted, I don't feel affected,16
Seeing the red trickle is what I thirst,17
No one can hurt me if I hurt myself first.
Author notes
Writers block. Sorry.
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Wow!
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wow. truly amazing
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I wish my writer's block was like yours.
It's a wonderful work; very emotional and cutting. Seems to speak out loud yet hide all at the same time. If that makes sense. 
Loved the rhyme scheme and just this poem in general - the best I've read in a while and the last line speaks a truth a lot of people rely on. Magnificent write. : ]
Lexx
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I absoulutly love this!! This decribs me and the way I feel sooo much!
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*Mouth hanging open* This is officially bookmarked! I loved it to pieces! So full of emotion and power. This is one of my favourite poems
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If that is writers block...i Have to read ur out stories..this peom was amazing and full of emotion
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Wow. Even the title hurts! This was really, well just out there, strait to the point and it almost made me cry : (. You have some REAL talent and i really love your stuff. Hope to read more!!!!
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If this is true, I am very sorry.
Overall though, this was an interesting poem. I understood it as an explanation of internal rage. I can tell you put a lot of emotion in this poem, and that you must've worked really hard at it. You have a very good talent in writing.
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I think this perfectly describes the situation-not an easy thing to explain. Brilliant job with this! It's incredible...wow!
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Wow you came up with that in writers block??
It's my fave poem yet. I loved the emotion and feeling you put into it. The flow was perfect. I lovve this. It's really good. Well done.
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COOOOOOOOOOOOL
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holy crap that was good. officially my fav poem i hav read on here for a while. welld onee
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good.i like it
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