Twenty five feet was all she had left to walk. A new life that begins once this threshold is passed. Her long flowing dress followed her down the aisle. The man on her right gave her to the man of her dreams. Together they state what they have planned on saying just before I do.1
Author notes
This was one of the most important times in my life so I figured it would be wonderful to express.
What did you think? Please comment!
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yep 55 words.
i went to a wedding yesterday and it was small and sweet and the bride was so nervous.
this was a good story, but I think it would have been better if you had stayed with her at the back door and focused on that moment or maybe the one where they exchange their vows.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
Susan -
On day perhaps.
A good story.
Talia -
I remember this day very well. We both were crying and surrounded by freinds.
John -
excellent
Very nice!!!
This is a wonderful story you have penned for this contest. Good luck in the contest
Bravo!!!
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