(Inspire by Bloody Valentine-Good Charlotte link to song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oxovPeqNsZ8)1
Skyler continued writing in his notebook and looked up at his friend Jenny from under his bangs. She smiled at him and he went back to writing his story. It was about a boy named Alan who was in love with his best friend who was a girl named Erin and about how Alan killed Erin's boyfriend John so maybe she'd come to him for comfort and they'd fall in love........................................2
The bell rang and Skyler stood up snapping out of his dreamland.3
Jenny walked over to him and smiled in a friendly way. "Hey think you can give me a ride? I have a date with Curt tonight so..." Skyler smiled to himself. It was all to perfect...just like in his story...4
"Of course Jen." 5
Skyler and Jen got into Skyler's beat up ford and he drove her to her large house in the country.6
"Bye Skyler, thanks!"7
After Jen got out Skyler drove away. He knew exactly where Curt lived and his parents wouldn't be home. Skyler thought out the nex part of his story as he drove...Alan arrived at John's house and knocked on his door waiting for it to...the door opened, "Hey Skyler what you need?"...without a word Alan gripped the...Skyler held a knife behind his back gripping it tighter and...Alan looked at John in the eyes...confusion was all over Curt's face as he looked at Skyler "Whats-"...Alan jumped at John and shoved the knife into...Skyler looked down at his bloody hands and the knife sticking out of...Alan had flipped about what he did but felt pure satisfaction as well...Skyler got in his truck and drove to Jenny's house...when Alan arrived at Erins and tried to tell her what happened she screamed and he realized...Skyler had forgotten to wash his hands and Jenny knew...Alan tried to explain to Erin...Jenny didnt understand...Alan ran...Skyler never stopped running and when he reached the next state he collapsed...Alan knew he could live the rest of his life out happily...Skyler smiled in satisfaction sitting on a bridge and took out his notebook from his coat to finish his story...and Alan lived happily knowing Curt...Skyler scratched that out...John was gone...8
Author notes
It gets kinda confusing so beware.
Comments
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Wow... and no one's commented? Hmmmm... well there are a few typos here and there... looks like you just missed hitting the keys when typing. I like this... I like the idea of the story in the story and you did it in a fresh way. I could even follow the parts that jumped between the stories "reality" and what Skyler was thinking in his head as he acted out his book. THis is like the "making one's fantasies their realities" sort of thing and I like how you wrote it. I also like how it just kinda picks up in the middle of the scene in the beginning. Anyway, good creepy feel to this story! Now, I finally read this... if you wanna see my newest creepy one go read "Doctor Finchley" it'll scare ya, promise
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Better scare me. ;D Thanks for the comment!
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