Tina sat on the edge of the bed her vivid green eyes scanning the wall as if something incredibly interesting had implanted itself there. As she sat in the cold room, she felt the air hit her skin, and cause shivers to run up her arms. She felt a hand rub up her back and onto her shoulder. Samantha leaned in to her and pressed her full breasts to her back as she moved her hair aside and began to kiss her neck. 1
“Come back to bed sweety.” Samantha moaned between kisses as her hand ran slowly down Tina’s body. Sam’s hand cupped her breast and kneaded it gently before running down to her flat stomach. She stopped there for a minute as she sucked on Tina’s neck. Then her hand continued it’s downward path until it reached Tina’s warm moistness. At this Tina turned toward Sam and pushed her down on the bed. She climbed slowly up to until she reached her shoulder and kissed up from the shoulder slowly working her way to her neck. She continued to kiss higher until she reached the girl’s lips. She brushed her’s softly against Sam’s just barely avoiding a kiss. Sam moaned as Tina moved away to kiss the other side of her neck. When she was done she leaned up and stared into Sam’s eyes as she licked her own lips and then flicked out her tongue to touch Sam’s. 2
As Sam stared at her wanting more she kissed down her body to Sam’s chest. As she reached her supple breast shed licked all the way to the nipple. When she did finally reach it, she took it in her mouth and teased it with her tongue. She lightly nibbled and sucked until she was fully satisfied with it’s hardness. Then she moved on to the other one. When she was finished she looked up at Sam as she began to kiss down her belly. The smooth skin covered toned muscle and looked sexy as heck. She kissed all the way down until she reached her pussy. 3
When she did, she ran her hot breath over it, avoiding contact. She kissed Sam’s inner thigh, hearing the girl moan for more. She worked her way up and again avoided contact until she had repeated the process on the other thigh. Now Sam was in absolute ecstacy. Tina finally leaned in and placed her lips to Sam’s. She pulled away and did it again, this time keeping her mouth slightly open and flicking her tongue out to taste Sam’s sweetness. She could feel herself getting turned on as she proceeded to pleasure Sam.4
She leaned away and parted Sam’s lips running her finger into Sam’s wet warm pussy. Sam moaned even louder and thrust up he hips. Tina paused until Sam calmed down and then began to move her finger in and out. After a few thrusts she added a second finger and began to move in and out in a wave motion. Sam was breathing hard and digging her nails into Tina’s upper arms. Tina leaned in and flicked her tongue against Sam’s clit. She licked it gently for a moment and then began to suck. Sam moaned louder than ever. Tina continued to move her hand in the same fashion as she had, and within moments Sam screamed out her pleasure as proof of it gushed over Tina’s hand.5
Sam growled and grabbed Tina under the chin she brought her face up and kissed her passionately. Her tongue delved into Tina’s mouth and she could taste her own juices. She pulled away and flipped Tina on her back. She kissed her again and ran her finger down the length of Tina’s body. She stopped at her bellybutton and ran her hand back up to Tina’s breast. Her nipples were already hard and so Sam kissed past her breast and down to her pussy. She didn’t bother teasing Tina in the same fashion that she had been teased. She instead kissed softly on Tina’s already swollen lips. She kissed very gently several times until Tina’s moans increased in volume. She then proceeded to separate her lips and run her tongue all the way from her vagina to her clit. She sucked on the clit for a moment and Tina moaned once again. Sam continued to suck as she inserted two fingers into Tina’s warm depths. She found the g-spot quickly and began to move her fingers in and out of Tina, massaging the g-spot with each stroke. During all this Sam managed to continue licking and sucking on Tina’s clit. Within moments a scream rang out, escaping Tina’s lips and making Sam pull away and smile. 6
Both girls collapsed on the bed nest to each other and kissed slowly and deeply. This wasn’t a kiss of hunger any longer, it was instead a sweet kiss. Once they pulled away they lay in each others arms both staring at the ceiling as if there was something terribly interesting there. As they lay this way sleep overtook them, each having a content smile playing on her lips.7
Author notes
I haven't written any homosexual erotica pieces although I have written many straight ones. I though I'd give this a whirl.
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Very well written, filled with passion and sensual love making as opposed to sex. I liked this very much. Good job.
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Hella awesum
there were a few errors, but i thot it was great, and i'm not even a lesbian or bi. i think u shouold definately write more stories like this.
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Very hot and steamy lesbian action there, you would make my male best mate proud, that soooo turns him on
Thanks for entering and good luck.
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Excellent
Well for someone who has never written homosexual/lesbian writes before, you did a spectacular job.
Explicit detail and I have to say this is a very nicely written story.
I enjoyed reading it and I encourage you to write more.
I felt the ceiling part was kind of weird, but I enjoyed reading the story all the same.
Keep it up.
Nooni
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Well written
I'm old ,male, and straight as a die. I enjoyed passion very much,you obviously know your subject well.
Takes me back quite a few years, it's almost as if you had a cam in my bedroom.
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Adorable. Try the 2 males those are alot of fun to make. Your a great writer. I liked how this is your first gay one. I really liked the girls how they were perfect. Try mabye not to make them perfect but chubby hehe. Not everyone is skinny. But its good
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this was great, especially considering that you've never done a homosexual piece before, maybe you could try to do one with 2 males
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Successfully steamy
We are just dropped into the scene with no idea who the characters are, almost like peeking into a window of a stranger's house, but we are held spellbound by the lusty sights we see. I appreciate your capable grammar and syntax, a rarity around here, sadly, Even more, however, I appreciate your ability to get me turned on by a lesbian story, something that isn't my normal cup of tea.
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yummy
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"She climbed slowly up to until she reached her shoulder" 'climbed slowly up to until' would sound better without the 'to'
"She brushed her’s softly against Sam’s just barely avoiding a kiss." 'her's' doesn't need the '
"As she reached her supple breast shed licked all the way to the nipple" 'shed' i assume should be 'she'
"sucked until she was fully satisfied with it’s hardness." 'it's' doesn't need the '
"moaned even louder and thrust up he hips." 'he' should probably be 'her'
"began to move in and out in a wave motion." 'waving motion' might sound better than 'wave motion'
"Both girls collapsed on the bed nest to each other and kissed slowly and deeply" 'nest' should be 'next' i presume
Sounds like an interesting occassion for both girls. Good piece, stimulating
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I'm glad you liked, and the end and beginning similarity is just one of those things I like to do. It feels as if it ties it together. Thanks for reading.
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No you're not intruding an audience just makes it more fun. I don't do many lesbian writes, but I think I'm going to do more, so look for them. And the girls very well may be bisexual since I am. So think of them however you like. I believe that's what makes a good story when the reader can use his or her imagination to add to the story. Glad you read it. Keep a lookout for more!
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Omg. This was...this was really really good, and I don't even like girls, lol! This is great writing, are you sure you never wrote gay erotica before? I really loved how you opened and closed in a simillar fashion to each other, looking off into space.
Great job and keep up the good work.
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I entered "The Auction" in your contest.
Your story made me hungry, but I might have been intruding since it was a girl thing. Do you do many lesbian writes? Are these two bi?
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Great erotica
Keep writing, this was a wonderful story
Thanks for entering
All the best,
Pozo
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hum hum
good job i must say. the ceiling thing..
ha. lol. im too young for this sh*t.good work thou.
an
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Very nicely written and in good taste. The writting pulls the reader in and does what it is supposed to. I'm not gay but your story does entice. Well done. I did notice a couple minor typo's that you may want to re-read and correct. 5th paragraph second line (he) I think you meant (her) and last paragraph first line (nest) I believe you meant (next). Excellent write thanks for sharing.
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I liked this...i need a shower now.
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I know what it's like to be new at homosexual erotica, but after awhile you get used to it. You've done a great job here. There are a few errors and seeing it called a bunny kinda threw off the mood a little, but it was still very well written. It has a somewhat innocent element to it. It's a very beautiful piece. Thank you for sharing it with all of us here on AP! Have a great day.
-Miranda
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Lovely. Really hot and erotic. But also really sweet. I really liked reading this piece.
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HOT!!!
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wow. great descriptions. this was good. very exciting
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Nice job...
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