The light filters through,
But the pine does not listen--
Tender coloring.1
Author notes
No "A" letters.
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A contest entry
- Challenging Challenges [Options] by Asfand.
225 points, ended July 2, 2009, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Impressive haiku, I think this is the best you could do with the rules it had to be "A-less".
Well done
♪~ Gwid ♫ ~
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That is pretty impressive, I do not think I could write without using "a" at all, lol. I use it a bit much I guess, I know a lot of words with it! I need it! lol!! This was short, but very good
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What a scene! With twelve words, you put through such imagery! Beautiful, so keep up the good work!!!!!!
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Excellent! I love how this piece creates a scene in metaphor rather than plain description! Great job! Thank you for your entry!
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