why

why do i feel this way?1

confused and helpless,2

like i have no real reason to be,3

why did u come now?4

why did you enter my life,5

when you know that i wont be here forever,6

theres no way i could ever wish,7

this feeling on anyone else,8

i wish you would speak to me,9

i wish i could see you,10

i wish everything was so simple,11

like its supposed to be,12

i wish i knew how u felt,13

i wish i could stay here forever,14

i wish i could tell you what im saying,15

because this is so important,16

I love you,17

I think,18

You should be here now,19

I would giv emy soul to you,20

If we could be together.21

Author notes

I know this isnt the best poem, probrably one of the worst ive written actually, but i am really depressed right now because im on holiday and ive met the guy of my dreams, im here for 3 more weeks but hes on a 2 week vacation on tuesday, everything just seems so messed up for me.

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  • xX Dear Diary Xx
    September 3, 2005
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    I think it is a great poem and the reason you wrote it is very heart felt. thanks for sharing


  • Frozentearz
    August 21, 2005
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    There was nothing wrong with this poem
    it is a free style write of feelings.
    deep pondering ones.
    Lots of us feel this way from time to time
    Blessings
    FrozenTears